@beth-torres
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty
Telling y’all this now so I won’t procrastinate this week, lol.
I’m going to edit the paragraph and then repost it by Friday, taking into account your suggestions.
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh yeahhh! That’d be perfect! 😂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here it is!!!
Wind spiraled frozen fractals and reddened Lainey’s cold-kissed nose.
Every breath crystalized in frozen puffs, and she wrapped her arms around herself, shivering.
The sun sunk beneath the houses across the street, bathing the neighborhood in amber light, and Lainey hugged her knees to her chest as she watched the s…
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Haha, true though. 😂
The guys I know can do the accent pretty well though, just cuz they’re so accustomed to it🤪
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Lolll 😂😂
The Aussies I know are actually redheads…
(Bro… I wonder if Andrew is stalking our conversation, seeing as he’s an Aussie 🤭)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It looks so much better! I love that we got to see their family now. I feel like I know the characters so much better already.
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
what is it about them that we Americans find so fascinating??
I have no idea 😂 I guess Americans just have a boring flat accent so we like to hear something different 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I feel bad saying this because a couple others have said the same thing, but I can’t submit a story this time. 😭😭 School and other responsibilities took priority over writing these past couple of weeks and I wasn’t able to get much done. 😣 I’m so sorry!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
I love that soo much!! That was always so sad to me. I didn’t know C. S. Lewis told everyone what happened to her afterward!
You should totally write it!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah! That sounds like an awesome idea!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol.
Me, with 12: 😐
That’s excessive.
What’s the second? Ciale?
Ya. Also I forgot about another one that I kind of care about but it’s not even on the list cuz it doesn’t have a name and it has almost no development so I don’t know why I care but I do 🤷♀️
Well, if you ever don’t want that feature anymore, I’ll gladly use it!
NO. IT MI…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Welll… I dunno. My brain has been more focused on art stuff than writing/worldbuilding stuff lately, so I haven’t gotten a lot of work done on my planets (I think at this point I only have, like, two that I care much about?). The floating islands idea (which was the whole main ‘thing’ for Thaliu) I’m not as interested in anymore, so I’m…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Alpha
Alpha tossed Dante a handkerchief. “Sorry, I was playing with a new technique. And put pressure on that cut.” Alpha reached out his hand and recalled the knife, which had lost its vapor but still came to his hand. “Sorry about the coat. I can get my little sister to fix it if you would like me to.” Alpha used the same process to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
LOL I’m laughing so hard, I’m crying.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
There’s actually a reason Silvanis acts this way. Maybe Sniper will figure it out sometime. It’d be funny to see what he would say XD.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I would love to see it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicles22
Silvanis and Fairy
Fairy smiled. She loved hearing everyone sing. She turned to Silvanis who was sitting beside her. “Isn’t it wonderful? I love hearing all the different songs!”
“Wonderful, no. Interesting, yes,” He replied.
Fairy elbowed him. “It is wonderful! Everyone…[Read more]
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