@beth-torres
Active 1 week, 2 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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HighScribe replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!??!?!
Wow it’s like you can read my mind lol!
Anyways….
I totally agree with what Whaley said.
The time jumps just take away so much from the story (even at the beginning where Aaron and Turin were working together) and it makes me lose interest. You do great at describing outside of the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Guys we should bring this back XD XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
ISN’T THAT CRAZY?!?!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
SARA ACTUALLY WROTE FOR ONCE IN HER LIFE
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Bwahahaha you guys aren’t going to believe what just happened
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Just popping in because I’m bored, lol!
I kinda agree with Whaley. The story just doesn’t seem like it’s going towards a specific goal…like the events seem a bit random and idk how to describe it but it’s like your story’s missing something but it frustrates me because I don’t know what exactly I’m missing, just that something…[Read more]
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Sara posted an update 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey peoplessss
School started for me today :/
Have I missed anything, lol!
I added a couple new chapters to my story…hehehe -
Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
😊 Thanks. Yeah, they definitely need some development. I can’t wait to see how all three of them react in a situation like this and with each other.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Just gonna share the link to my brain dump so y’all can see their face claims:
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @grcr @theducktator
M’kay! I’ve decided on another character duo! (Actually three characters, but I’m only gonna write from the POV of two of them) I need practice writing these guys since I don’t normally do first person, but their novel is going to be completely in first!
So! Without further ado….…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Got to 50k words eleven days later than I wanted to, but hey, it finally happened.
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HighScribe replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I absolutely loved that 😂😂😂 POCKET GLITTER!!!!!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Pretty much, lol. We like to give a little bio about our characters before adding them in though (appearance, age, maybe a few characteristics [so we could group them with another character that could cause some personality clashes], etc.)
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @theducktator
I’m in! This week is gonna be crazy busy and next week school starts, so I can’t be super active either.
I think I’ll either stick with Everton and Adrian or play with some newly created characters… 😏 If no one wants to RP first I can start.
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HighScribe replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ah, thank you.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @whoever-cares
I have a scene you might possibly like.
“What do you want?” inquired a strange masculine voice behind him.
Nahim swung around, his crystal sword hitting a breastplate, damaging the paint. Nahim leaned back in surprise. This man seemed to be wearing mithaln! The man, his face covered by a helmet of the style commonly use…
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ve made it a point in the past year or so to make eye contact when I’m listening to someone, but sometimes I start thinking of ways I’d describe their eyes in a book and stop paying attention to what they’re actually saying. 🫣😂
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Good luck with school!
thanks girl!
Heeeyy. 😄
I’ve been reading all your chapters still!! I finished 33, like, a while ago, lol! 😁 I really like how you’ve “officially” included Livia in it, and I really like that last scene where she blows the Pythonos away!
OMC JULIA!!! <3
Hi!!! Aw thank you so much! For some reason I don't really like the last three chapters…but oh well XD everyone else seems to love them soooo *shrugs*