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@acancello

Ummmmm……that’s like one of my nightmares…like my biggest fear is evil scientists experimenting on me!!!! (I know, I read too much lol)

Maybe you could tie into the machine factor with your title? Idk. I’m also pretty bad at coming up with names XD

@acancello

Sure! Also, is there a connection between CHIME and the whole moon situation, or no? Because you might not want to name the book something related to the moon if it doesn’t really come up in the book. Does that make sense? Basically, if the power shortage thing is just the setting of the story and doesn’t really have anything to do…[Read more]

@acancello
Yep! I don’t think it’s unrealistic that scientists would try to launch something into space to collect energy, although I don’t really know how sunlight and energy works out there. @thearcaneaxiom might have some better suggestions. (Sorry if you’ve already been on this topic, I don’t remember.)

@acancello

Okay, got it. So it harvests energy from the sun (maybe because it’s slightly close to the sun than the earth is?).

@freedomwriter76

Hey! Do you wanna RP next for our group?

(I almost forgot about this. XD) But I totally understand if you’re busy. 😊

Here was the last RP:

Adrian

“Germany,” Esther explained. “Although I have lived in America for the past several years…what of both of you?”

“Aletheia,” Ev answered for the both of them.

Adrian wasn’t paying a…

[Read more]

@acancello

Sooo… I don’t have a specific title idea, but just a suggestion.

I don’t know if you’ve figured out what C.H.I.M.E. stands for yet, but the words in the title could each start with the letters from that word. It’d be one of those things where readers eventually notice and freak out. “Like WhAt?!?!?” (At least that’s what I would do…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled awkwardly, the warmth on his cheeks feeling out of place. He willed it away and looked up at Liv. “I guess I just don’t understand how Callie’s mind works all the time. How do I know what I say will make her happy or… unhappy?” He caught Callie’s gaze as they passed each other again and she gave him a warm…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks. 😊

@esther-c

It’s totally fine! I understand, life gets busy! 🙂 No rush!

@acancello

So, where does the moon get the energy from? And why wouldn’t it just be like, a satellite or something? What’s special about a moon?

I’m thinking maybe something with Lunar in the title? Lunar Overload..?

I kinda think Eclipse would be interesting, because it references the moon and basically, they’re having an electricity…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I’ve seen it, but I’ve been busy lately and haven’t gotten to it yet. 😅 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written today. 🙃 (And I still haven’t read your WIP yet. 😭 I’m so sorryyy. I’mma do that today too.)

@walkbyfaith @grcr

Those are good points! I’m using the You version app, but I might check out the Bible project app! I don’t really have too much to add, but I enjoyed reading what you guys thought!

Hmmm…One of my favorite parts about writing is naming the book and it’s chapters, cuz it’s usually easy XD

• C.H.I.M.E. (I know, kinda obvious, but your story seems to mention it a lot)

My brain is not responding rn, so I’ll come back to this, but I honestly like using the name of your organization. It’s a neat acronym, and easy to remember.

@esther-c

In case you haven’t seen the RP yet…I RP’d Liv’s response to Fynn’s awkward question, lol

@acancello

So…what exactly is C.H.I.M.E.? Like why are they taking people? (I understand if you can’t tell me…but one, I really have wanted to know ever since you told me about your book, and two…it might help me help you with the title!)

@acancello

I’m not very good at titles either XD

But I would say that you should make sure that is has connection with your book. As an example, the titles you mentioned having previously considered I would have a hard time remembering, because they could really belong to almost any book. So I would just say watch out for that.

Sorry I don’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Actually, I think that has to be my favorite scene ever. The actor for Bucky (forgot his name) really knew how to put the expression in Bucky’s eyes <333

@loopylin

BTW, I know a really cute blood bay pony named Twitch. Black mane and tail, nice coat, blaze, and the cutest, softest nose ever! So, your charrie is a pony in my head. No offense.

@jonas

I wasn’t aware.

@loopylin

Alpha Grath

Alpha slid his knives back in their sheaths. In a gesture of friendship, Alpha held out his hand to the drop in.

“Don’t worry about it, I made the hole in the ceiling myself. And speaking of our location, Achlys, have you found me yet?” The AI’s feminine voice replied,

“Your location is still…[Read more]

@acancello

I tried a recently and it didn’t work.