Beth

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@whalekeeper

I did not forget, I was thinking.

Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you are the author, and every decision you make is p…

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@loopylin

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

@esther-c

I don’t really think I’ll be able to help, cuz I’m completely out of my element when it comes to contemporary.

I don’t know about the first vs. third person problem, but if you have multiple POV characters, I’d recommend that you stick to…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.

And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]

@rae

I love this idea. I haven’t been on much lately but I’d definitely try to get on more to participate!

@highscribeofaetherium Sorry, spelled your tag wrong

@loopylin

When Dante returns, he will most likely find Jr in the room trying to figure out how to read the note. Jr has a vast knowledge of languages, but this language he can only speak and understand, reading is basically impossible for him (he probably recognizes words here and there, but otherwise nothing)

I feel like Sebzter Gangster is…[Read more]

I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6

So I need help.

XD

I’ve been plotting in my head for a contemporary novel that I’m really excited about. I love the concept, the characters, and even the setting so much! I just need a better structure for my plot. So far I’ve been writing random scenes, I just have a feeling that when I finally sit down to write the book in whole, it’s not gon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

1.      Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)

I felt like it was pretty realistic, but I’ve also never written anything like that before or experienced something like it. I a…[Read more]

Hey, everyone!! Just so y’all are aware, I’ll probably begin posting the next polls sometime after Easter. (:

@freed_and_redeemed

First, YOU NEED TO TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TO MY POOR RIKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sobs for him*

Second,

1.      Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)

2.      What are your t…

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@godlyfantasy12

We’ve all cheated Wyoh by sharing pics through links. Canva’s free, all you have to do is make an account and upload the pic to a design. Then share the link so anyone can view.

But if you don’t want to do that then… idk, yeah whatever 😂

@stephie

Ah, gotcha. That makes sense.

Oh, cool!!

@keilah-h

I can’t believe I missed your post!

That’s a really neat history (I’ve actually always wondered what Snakes real name is XD). I will try to catch part two instead of missing it this time XD.

@stephie

I could only think of one book 😭 I’ve read so many though, I don’t even know how I could only come up with one XD Maybe I’ll think of another one later, lol.

@stephie

What’s up with that jingle? I’ve got nothing in my head but the billion songs I’m trying to keep straight for choir.

Haha 😂 Do you enjoy choir though? I did it for a year and really enjoyed it. (Until the choir director changed… then it wasn’t so fun… :/)

@princesachronicle22 @anyoneelse

Queen Silvae.

“Maybe it is so. I’m sorry if it is. I did not handpick you, you were chosen by my power, for it and I are like symbiotes. We are one, but it has a mind of its own. Why you were chosen, I don’t know.”

@jonas

Yeh, along the lines of. Sorry, I get a weird style sometimes.

@whocares (which is…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

You might have succeeded in getting that jingle stuck in my head… 😑😂😂