@beth-torres
Active 23 hours, 35 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears for sure!
Good. I was worried it was kinda unclear.
A Violinnnnnnnnn (and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)
No way! That’s amazing! Idk even how to react, that’s just SO GREAT! And I’m o…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yep, makes sense. One thing that threw me out a little was how Nahim stuttered a bit, and his shivery response. I haven’t seen much of this character but for some reason I picture him as the stoic, silent warrior type. The stuttering especially sounds like a younger man or boy – the type like in Way of Kings, with the boy who was dra…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
OK! Here we go!
Everton
The figure who looked most like a man let out a deep laugh. “Attack? I could break every bone in your body without using a weapon, human.” The man—who Ev could now tell had blue skin—lowered the spear he held. Adrian stepped out from the around the corner, shooting Ev a disapproving glare.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
I’m sorry it’s been an eternity since I’ve RPed!! 😭 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written and posted this afternoon. I should have time. (Not that I didn’t have time before… I was just being lazy… XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ahhhh, I’m backkkk. Sorry it’s been like f o r e v e r 😭 I have no good excuse except procrastination, lol. XDD
Fynn
“Awesome.” Fynn grinned, rubbing his hands together. “Then into the dark we go.” He dramatically turned on his heel and led them out of the classroom. “The hallways are spooky in the dark.” Fynn wasn’t sure why…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
That’s a lot more code than last time I tried to post a pic….
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
Aaaaannnnddddd…. Nerp
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
Test, test…
<img src="Error__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var _audins_dom="kingdompen_org",_audins_did=566417;__ez.queue.addDelayFunc("audins.js","__ez.script.add", "//go.ezodn.com/detroitchicago/audins.js?cb=3");<img s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Rae actually asked this same question a while back, and what she told you is basically what I would’ve said. Koshka’s advice was really good too. So yeah, I basically have nothing else to add. I feel like they covered everything I can think of. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ooh we did!! We were right in the path of totality. It was amazing!! Definitely unforgettable! I don’t even know how to describe it. Because the lighting kept getting funky, it was a little eerie, until it got as dark as it is right when the sun dips below the horizon. It’s so cool!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares
Hey,I need help knowing if this scene feels forced or anything.
The context is that Mandin invited Nahim to a festival that Mandin’s family was having, and Nahim promised to finally tell Mandin his traumatic backstory.
Evening came,…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
Every time you smile, a flower blooms somewhere around the world at the same time.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I had to do this same thing last month… Poor Nahim was totally broken…
Anyways, what I personally did was not focus much on the physical, but went more for the thoughts and emotions of my MC. It was still awful, but not in a gruesome way.
I did mention the body language a couple times of the one being tortured, but…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’d RP but I inspiration levels are at -5 right now.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes, I’ve been thinking about that for the past couple months. For whatever reason, skinwalkers ad hydras have been popping into my head every time I think about it…
I’ll begin brainstorming but for now let us set up our characters. Idk, maybe we make up someone who can get captured by a dragon and everyone goes to save them 🤷🏻♀️…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Silvanis
“Of course you’re a dragon! I’m not stupid, despite popular opinion. And no, no other dragons-” Silvanis stopped, looking around. “Well, minus the one outside. He doesn’t appear to have a rifle, but my vision can kinda get blurry through walls so don’t trust me. Can’t tell his color but doesn’t appear to have a feminine build.…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m concerned about the urges I’m getting to look up and check how the eclipse is coming along.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Neat!
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
No 🙁 it’s supposed to be pretty good where we are, but we couldn’t get any glasses. I guess I’ll have to wait another twenty years.
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@rae
I love that.
Me too.