@beth-torres
Active 3 days, 14 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks ago
It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?
Also, are you planning to add a name at the top?
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Kefa changed their profile picture 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Kefa replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Guys! I tried digital art again, and I think it came out even better 😆😆😆 please tell me if it is good!!!! (I tried really hard🥲 I think it is good enough)
Ignore the bad handwriting
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Kefa replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I guess this will be the first time I take part! And plus the extra delay will help me! (As long as I don’t procrastinate.)
Micah 7:8 Do not rejoice over me, my enemy; when I fall, I will arise. When I sit in darkness, the Lord WILL be a light to me.
No idea what that means… Werp I am Richarded.
Dang it, darn it, doughnut!!!!! So wh…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
hello?
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@theducktator
Male:
Bartholomew, Egbert,Female:
Veraminta, Peggy
(Jk, do not use these names 😂 I looked up ugly names!!!! 😂😂)
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Esther replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
No worries!! :))
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Esther replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Lol! Frfr 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
sounds great!! Tysm!!
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!
Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Unfortunately, I don’t think so. Ellette is out of town for the next two weeks, and I have family visiting this week (and I’ll be on vacation next week.) I would imagine that we’ll pick it back up on one of the following Saturdays, unless @savannah_grace2009 or someone else is interested in leading them while we’re gone. I don’t k…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh no, I’m sorry! I’ll be praying for y’all as you travel and try to get things worked out.
We’ll miss you! 😢
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Okay guys, I want your honest opinion on this story!
(It is creepy, and short)
I heard it…Â
I awoke to an awful shriek. in my reached up to my ears, to feel them blood… leaking out of them…
I shot up in my bed, and ran to the window, I saw the back of a beautiful woman. She glowed silver under the moon, her white hair blew in the wind. I…
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Kefa replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
it isn’t your fault, Â I am not mad… I am just upset
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I have plenty more 😁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Kefa replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
it is nothing. you would find it dumb the reason I am upset…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
yeahhhh lol
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