Beth

@mineralizedwritings

Ikr? 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks!! 😊

@keilah-h

Oooh, sounds cool!

@savannah_grace2009

Ooohh nice cliffhanger! XD

@jonas

Yeah, I get it, school can be really busy! Though, when I homeschooled, I didn’t usually have that long of a day.

Now, with public school and volleyball, I go to school from 8 until 3:45, have practice from 4 until 5:30, then come home. My little sister does gymnastics, and my little brother does taekwondo in the afternoons (both still do…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Oh my goodness, I love that! if you post any of it on KP, please tag me, I would love to read that!

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks Min!

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @hybridlore @keilah-h

Here’s what I’ve been working on!

Beep. Beep. Beep. She squirmed in agony as the tendrils of sound beat against her temples like a jackhammer. She did not want to wake up. She did not want to open her eyes. She did not want to live in a world…

[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I love it!!

@rae

Of course! You’re welcome anywhere! I usually just pop in and reply to things XD

Is it okay if I join you guys here?

@jonas

Sorry if it seems like I’m just ranting about my accomplishments, lol.

Let me rephrase that.

Sorry, I need to stop talking about how many words I have, lol.

Hi guys!

mind if I join the party, lol?

@jonas

Yeah, there’s definitely a happy medium!

Months without writing? I’ve been writing like….a LOT….my family thinks I’m mentally insane, as do my classmates, because of how much I write and am on KP lol. It’s hard to imagine not writing XD I just hit 20K! (1,000 more than I had last week, lol) My class thinks I’m weird because I’ll…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m usually the opposite, I get so excited about writing the first chapter that I write a couple pages, then start worldbuilding for real, and then I write a blurb. Though I haven’t done a lot of that, either. (Unfortunately, I write way more than I plan sometimes.) I usually find myself with a lot of chapters that don’t make much sense in…[Read more]

@jonas

I think I like Tempest and Flamebreaker the best.

I like your blurb! I would totally read that if it was in a library!

@thearcaneaxiom

I just read through the second chapter, and I really like it! How do you come up with these ideas? I could never, lol. I’m having problems just coming up with a simple magic system, haha.

Great work! Also, I like the second cover, because it shows the “reflection” thing that Talien was diagnosed with and I like the theme/design…[Read more]

@jonas

yeah, I do agree with you it is realistic, I’m just experimenting with Marcurious a bit. But you’re right, Marcurious does end up having a sort of breakdown later.

The more I think about it, I guess that character arc is Marcurious a little bit, after he spends a week in the UNIT, hehe (insert evil laughter and horrible smells. bwahaha!).…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I really like the chapter! You did really well explaining things, but not info-dumping. One question, though, if Tailen is going to starve to death, wouldn’t he die of dehydration first? Or was that explained and I just missed it?

As for the covers, the first one is simpler, which might be good, but the other one is cool too. N…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Marcurious now has a catch phrase, lol.

Well, I’m dead.