@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?
Yeah I think so.
 An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who do the readers connect to? Once they get to know one set of char…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @mineralizedwritings
Yeah I’m good with whatever 🙂
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
🥰🥰🥰 great job, girl!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@traiblazer
KP ate my original post where I had put all the ages of the McKinleys and so I had to hurry and redo it. So I must have forgotten to put Esther’s age, but she’s seven like @grcr said.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until they’re a little older. Bennett also is going to the army when he turns 17 or 18, but depending how their relationship would play out, they could write letters to each other and such.
I know you also said Tin…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@grcr @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer
Okay guys, sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!
Reuben McKinley
He’s 45, with blue eyes and blonde hair. He’s very kind and loves to talk with people. He’s one of those parent’s who’ll stay hours at church talking with other parents! He’s good looking and muscular.
Ada McKinley
She’s…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone
Okay guys…sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!
Reuben McKinley
45 years old, 6’3. He’s easygoing and friendly, very easy to talk to. He’s one of those parents that will stay at church for hours chatting it up. He has blue eyes and blonde hair, good looking and muscular.
Ada McK…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone
Sorry guys, I’m super late! Anything important that I missed that I should know before I make my “family”?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
And now I put that in the wrong place.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Anyways, getting back on topic, I started warbreaker, and it’s ok so far.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Lol that’s true.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Excuses excuses.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
All of those took me less than a week.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Skyward.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Wait- it took you a while month??
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I have thought about what you said about the problems with Ottoline’s character, and have decided on a few new things about her history. I was thinking that instead of just the “laboratory”, that they take the Paynes to a work camp to build tools and new technology. Then if they become sick, or get out of line, then the Pythonos…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
HE DID??
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
@thearcaneaxiom
Wyi, I believe Yumi has some spoilers for RoW (I am unsure how much is said, but they have the potential to be very big) -
HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Oh yeah, it’s called Sixth of the Dusk.
Also, secret project 4 has a blurb now. Here it is:
#1 New York Times bestselling author Brandon Sanderson shows us a future in the Cosmere universe where a perpetual planetary wanderer must decide whether to keep running, or stay and make a difference on a struggling planet. Years ago he had c…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Warbreaker (Now in the correct section) in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
The one on Threnody is called Shadows for Silence in the Forests of Hell, and I’ve heard it’s like a horror novel 😬
Theres also one that takes place on the planet The First of the Sun, which has the Aviars, but idk what it’s called.
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