Beth

@jonas

You have a point, but I’ll say again that it depends on the character. The more I see of a character, the more I’ll get to know them, and that’s why I feel like it’s important to have developed side characters. But characters without a major role in the story, definitely.

And yeah, that’s kind of what I was thinking, too. The way that…[Read more]

@rae

Lol! I know, it happens to me too. It just means you’re improving!

Great job on the chapter! I don’t think the italics worked, but it’s not a big deal. Can’t wait to read teh next one!

You know what? I just read it, and realized that that style is outdated and I only wrote this about a couple months go. Sheesh, I can’t even keep up with my own writing!

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Again,

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first and second chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you…[Read more]

Here was some brainstorming I did on one of my character ideas!

Name (full, nickname, anything relevant to the story): Isabelle Merrida Cortess. She’s named after her ancestors (maybe an Isabelle who came on the original ship to colonize the planet).
Race/description: Unruly/frizzy dark reddish-brown hair, hazel brown eyes. Sort of tall for her a…[Read more]

@jonas

So, I decided to create a doc and just put all the characters I’ve created into it and do the questionnaire for each of them in there, but one thing I realized is that this questionnaire doesn’t necessarily work for non-major characters. Side characters aren’t supposed to be super fleshed out, they’re supposed to be flat, so which questio…

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@spinner4him

My favorite character to write is probably one of the main characters in my current WIP, whose name is Obsidian Gray. He’s pretty easy to write, but hasn’t been a point-of-view character yet, so I don’t know for sure.

Ok awesome!!

What’s your current WIP about? If you’re posting things about it on here, would you tag me?

So, it’s a tr…[Read more]

Ok, so life has been really busy, but I should be able to write another RP tomorrow. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.

@rae

Okay, yay!! XD

@kyronthearcanin

Okay! XD good! I’m glad it wasn’t annoying you, cause it was a lot of tags XD

Gotcha, yeah. Totally understand that.

@kyronthearcanin

I shall remember the paragraph thing! Funny, just a minute ago, I had someone say almost the same thing after I emailed hr my short story!

Thoughts are in italics on my Word document, just they didn’t stay there, when I copied and pasted.

You have no idea how happy it makes me feel when someone says they want to read the next…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]

@sinner4him

Ranks, they are based on posts. oh, wait, you’ve already been told that, never mind.

You can click directly on the Community tab and it comes up with a whole bunch of stuff, select the thing that best fits your book and create a new topic.

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

No problem XD hopefully it wasn’t getting annoying, I just keep seeing things that I’m like, “Oh Ava does that!” or whatever, so yeah XD. When are you leaving YWW?

@rae

That was really good! I’m super interested to s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I grew up a really sensitive kid though.

Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD