Beth

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂

@rae

. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the is no pain, there would be no point in slapping someone.

4.Fear is also an emotion I don’t think she could even feel (except the Fear of God) until after she sins. Read genesis 3 aain, and notice tha…

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@grcr

I really like that board!

@fernweh_grace

XD Yeah, I could see that lol.

@grcr

Sounds cool!

@rae

Okay! 🙂

@fernweh_grace

No problem! Thanks!

I really like it! XD The toad… Lol.

By the way, I’ve retired Nahim from this RP, it’s not going anywhere with him.

When you’ve got WAY too many characters and stories but not enough time…

(Note: I didn’t draw this)

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, I’ll be brainstorming. Do you mind if it’s medieval themed? Cuz I’ve got a bright idea for that one.

@mineralizedwritings

Me like it! The armor and clothing is PERFECT. The face is a little unclear, but yeah, WAY to often I’ve ruined a picture trying to “make it better”. XD

@anyone

What would you guys like to see me draw? You’ve seen ONE drawing and my style is realistic (mostly), and I will take offers to draw someone else’s character if…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I read your epilogue and a few things stuck out to me…

(ordered by relevance)

1. I love it.

2. In the first part I almost think you use the Name ‘Great One’ a little to much.

3. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the…[Read more]

@grcr

Okay, what is your story about? I’m intrigued, your mood boards are really interesting!

@jonas

Is this better?

“Scared you?” The boy smirked. His voice was weak, and his hands trembled a bit, but he lifted his chin, and wet his lips with the determination of a warrior, shaking his mess of black hair out of his eyes. His eyes fell on Ottoline. “That’s low,” he looked at the Traitor. “You’re going to have a girl kill me?” Ottoline…

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@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

GUYS….thoughts on this book cover??? I made it last night and idk if I love it or hate it….

@jonas

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried that a fellow prisoner might attack him. He doesn’t even have to notice her, given the…

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@whalekeeper

It’s just when you spend all your time learning to understand other people, you forget to develop your own sense of self, you know? It doesn’t come as easy.

That’s me when I’ve been writing for too long…

@whalekeeper

BrUH I knOw I look sweet and gentle on the outside, but you ain’t seen my stupid side.

😂😂😂 I feel that, lol

Boys are….boys.

@jonas

Although, would that really be the top of his concerns when he sees Ottoline? Both of them are in prison and she’s only part-Azer, so it doesn’t quite seem logical that he would be legitimately worried about her trying to get revenge. It’s a funny reaction, but it relies a lot on the reader connecting all the dots.

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@rae

lol. A RP is short for role play.