@beth-torres
Active 1 day, 8 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s fine. I am usually the same!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You guys really escalated the problem. Oh boy, here we go…
Nahim
Nahim punched Zahlin in the stomach, a little to the side and up at an angle, a trick he had accidentally (unfortunately for his older brother) learned many years ago to put pressure on the diaphragm. Zahlin brought his sword down on Nahim, but it…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Awww thanks!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
No problem.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry, when I posted that I hadn’t seen your post. Woops.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok, awesome. Thanks. 👍
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @anyone-else-that-I-missed
Ok, so I really want to RP for Amir or Hedieh today, but it looks like a lot has happened. 😂 Can someone catch me up on what’s going on? All I know is that they were transported to a different world and a queen wants them to f…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oooh yeah! I like that! I hadn’t noticed that issue before, but that does make sense. And it also really shows how much the brothers really love each other. (I don’t know what you’re planning to do with this story, but it’s also could be a point of conflict among the brothers because some might want to leave and others want to…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
😶
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lets let them fight it out. I don’t think Zahlin really wants to kill either of them (but who really knows what’s going on inside their heads).
Zahlin
“This isn’t going to be a fair fight!” Ellis said. He picked up his sword. “it’s two against one! You’re making a big mistake if you underestimate your opponents!”
Za…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol 😂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae
*me in the background watching from the shadows*
FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
DUEL! DUEL! DUEL! 😂 btw did you see my last post? Zahlin tripped Ellis who fell into Nahim and then Zahlin gave Conviction back to Ellis and said he wanted a ‘fair fight’ by which he meant a 1v2 lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, sorry, i was too lazy to check XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Actually, a duel might be fun…I’m rethinking. What do you think?
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
“I want you to think very carefully about your next moves. I don’t want to have to kill you both.” Ellis through his word over his head, which nahim thought a little pointless. He heard another voice say this was going to be fun, but he ignored it, keeping his yes of the sword waved in front of him.
“You think your…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Zahlin
A fist collided with the side of his head and Zahlin was thrown back. He twisted around and hooked Ellis’ leg, sending him spinning into Nahim. Zahlin took a few steps back and kicked Ellis’ sword across the floor towards him.
“I want this to be a fair fight.” Zahlin said, “Apologies for manhandling your blade, I’m not…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi Elizabeth, welcome to Kingdom Pen!!
I’m hybridlore on here, a homeschooled high schooler, sci-fi/dystopian writer, violinist, and follower of Jesus. It’s nice to meet you!
I didn’t read everyone’s questions, so if I give you the same one, don’t worry about answering it.
What are your favorite books/series?
What’s the plot of…[Read more]
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