Beth

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m still not saying if it will even happen.

Yeah, yeah. XD Can’t be giving away spoilers before the book even starts.

@ellette-giselle

You know, y’all called gladiator fighting last time……

So you’re overdue. 😝

@ellette-giselle

I know! Who’s wearing it now!? Or is it just a throwback to Dietrich’s death and place in the story?

Uhh… there will be gladiator fighting. I feel like Leon is going to get pulled into that again. Maybe Julian too. And I might be seeing a prison cell on the bottom left… unless that’s something else.

@keilah-h

also I love the title.

Me too!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!!

Oh boy. 🫣 I see the white knight on there… and an arena… and the creepy prince mask. 😬

Filled it out!

Y’all’s characters are hilarious. I had so much fun reading through all of that xD

@keilah-h

Okay!

XD. We actually usually use Google Meet for the calls, but that might have the same option?

@esther-c

Aw, okay! No worries!

@hybridlore

i won’t be able to make it this time around 😭

@theducktator

Awesome! XD Last call my brother was messing around with the window behind me too xD

@esther-c @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @theshadow @stephie @anyone-else

Just a reminder that the group call will be tomorrow morning, Lord willing!

10:30 EST / 9:30 CST / 8:30 MST

(I think I got that right? I’m not really sure about the abbreviations. XD)

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@koshka

Or you could include a twin getting asked that question and give the reader a glimpse into that irritation. I’d appreciate that. XD

I may find a way to work that into TcoH. XD

@liberty

It looks great! Aside from the things Keilah and Elishavet have mentioned… does he like music?

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

@loopylin

MELISSA!!! You’re so adorable!! <333

Oooh! Let’s do this for Hallie first! (And if she were in a real interview, she prolly wouldn’t answer these questions 100% honestly like I’m having her do now. 😉 )

1. What is your full name?

Hallie Grace Woodbury I just realized I never gave her a name so I had to choose one on the spot XD

2. What is the most important thing the averag…[Read more]

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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