@beth-torres
Active 6 days, 11 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Help? in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 8 months ago
Ooh, that’s hard.
Um… I don’t know if this is too dark or not, or even what you’re going for, but I remember in Harry Potter that Bellatrix was torturing Hermione (in the seventh book) and Ron and Harry couldn’t see what was happening, but they heard her screams. Obviously, it sounds worse in an actual movie than reading it in a book. But…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
yes I’ve read the hiding place and I absolutely love it! Have you ever heard of Darlene Deibler? She’s also one of my favorites and she has an AMAZING book that I think is sort of similar to Corrie’s.
Oh cool, I’ve never heard of her. I’ll have to check that out!
Kaylin is the oldest child. She’s very protective, loyal and quick. But…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh you’re fine! 😊
Fynn
“I guess so. Sounds good.” He sauntered up to Lukas and bowed playfully, extending a hand. “May I have this dance?”
Lukas rolled his eyes and shoved Fynn’s shoulder, causing him to take a few stumbling steps backwards.
He bounced right back over to Liv. “My bad.” A laughing glance at Lukas. “Let m…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Awesome choices!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Love ittt. 🙃
I love this! Abbie Emmons just confuses me the more I watch her to be honest…and the internal conflict stuff just wasn’t working for me and was soooo overwhelming, but you did a really awesome job of developing your characters!!
Thanks!
Yeah, she can be kind of vague sometimes. I feel like for me, it tak…[Read more]
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Ruth started the topic Help? in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I have this chapter in my book where my MC (Nahim) is captured by the antag (Vorgan). Instead of directly physically torturing Nahim, Vorgan opts for torturing Nahim’s best friend , Mandin. The idea is to emotionally and possibly mentally break Nahim by watching his friend be hurt.
Nahim is the type where he would rather bear the pain…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah I did. Idk why, I just have been writing snippets in first person present so it was on my mind.
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Ruth replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I sound like an idiot and feel like one.
This reply is going to be short, I didn’t get to sleep until like four this morning so my thinking braincells are dead.
Shall we take this a different direction? Do you believe that God is not God, unless He is Omnipotent, Omnibenevolent, Omnipresent, and Omniscient?
Is my guess…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
Hairline! Thank you, my brain refused to come up with the right word. Thank you. Yes, that’s it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sorry, didn’t see your post.
I like it!
If no one has a spy…
I have a charrie name Javam Ram who can act very gentlemanly, but I already have a lot of charries in here…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m brainstorming while listening to epic music for once, and it’s not Working rn. *Changes music to one of my fav SABATON’s*
Oh, also, I found my sheet about Noranay, so I might change her a little bit, and Nahim’s voice is going to sound like grating or screeching metal for a while.
Nora
- Nora gets impatient with…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@vinagirl maybe #LIBERT?
@trailblazer Looks good! Excited for the next part!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
NO!! IT WAS POINTING TOWARDS MINE!!!! Bwahahahahaaaaa!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Maayyyyybee?????? That might work????????
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone
Does anyone have any tips on how to draw bangs/the spot the hair attaches to the forehead on a character? I tend to have a lot of trouble with it, especially the far side, so any advice would be appreciated.(Btw I usually go for a more cartoony/sketchy style, so I don’t need it to be super detailed)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
It is so much fun!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I loved it! (As always)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes, yes, YES! That’s literally EXACTLY what I was thinking, too!
I completely agree…it was so much fun when our characters would argue and then get to know each other!
Well, the quickest way to make them fight is to start DRAMA, which could be anywhere from a love triangle (we’re desperate, okay!?!?!) to accidentally offending…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Sorry I’m late to the welcome party, haha!
I’m Sara, a fantasy writing, horse loving, dog obsessed, chicken hoarding teen girl!
I live on a farm in Montana with my family and attend a public school!
Do you have any hobbies? Favorite foods?
Sorry, I’m not good at asking questions XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh, I didn’t realize that.
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