@beth-torres
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim
As soon as his eyes opened, he had rolled over and pulled out his green crystal sword. Lord Nahim Nayhelm found himself in the middle of nowhere, having first awakened on his back in the middle of a soft-grassed field. Standing up, he surveyed the field and treeline. Nothing. No friends, no enemies. Nahim looked down and felt himself with…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @y’all
Sure! I actually have a good idea how it looks in my mind.
So the Lillen palace is set in a walled circle. Outside the circle is the city. The city is also formed in a circle, around the palace. A lot of white and pastel colors, mostly only low aesthetic walls for defense, except the thrown-together defences for the seige.
Inside…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@anyone-stalking-the-forums
LILITU!!! AHHHH
Sef was pulled from her sleep with a touch on her arm.
She flinched and pulled back, retreating deeper into the covers.
“Sef, it’s only me,” she heard Indie’s voice.
She dared to peek out from her cocoon.
Her pain had diminished immensely, though her knee still throbbed.
The thought that haunted…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m gonna keep Black Sky, but if you want no other dragons, that’s fine. I usually have a grand villain with a bunch of minions and allies (think Emperor Palatine-like villain) and Black Sky is that villain for Lillen.
Lillen
Pressed upon all six points of the star, Lillen begins to fall. King Altin lies upon his deathbed, wounded in battle. Now…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
Lukas chuckled at Xandro’s goofing off. “Yeah, buddy. If you behave, I’ll pay for you. Maybe I’ll get you an ice cream or something.”
Xandro nodded.
“Wait, no, not an ice cream,” Lukas said, his eyes wide. He cast a worried side glance towards Liv, holding back a laugh. “Alright, how about we go to that diner down…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@beth-torres too
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay! everyone ready for our first rp? I’m gonna do a introductory Lillen one.
@highscribeofaetherium @princesachronicle22 @jonas @keilah-h
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok! I’ll have to check it out.
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Aww, Sef!!! 😭
Girllll, whyyy??
You wrote this so well though. And I love Lilitu. 😁 But I’ve probably told you that already. 😂
Oh my goodness, I love your signature. 🥰
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
They look really good! (I don’t think anything looks particularly wrong with Flaz)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Guys…sorry I know this is kind of a long segment…so just ignore this if you don’t have time!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And then a bad guy POV….
SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…
The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.
He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
They’re similar to lightsabers but way cooler because they’re shaped like swords instead of sticks.
I found that really funny for some reason XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Sef and Chase have only known each other for half an hour, and at least on Chase’s end, he’s already about asking her to the dance! (I have a grand scheme going on with him)
Xandro still on a sugar high from that candy? XD
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
Yeah…I was a little worried about that. Thank you for the feedback!
But that’s all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Uhhh…I wish I could give you some smart ans…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 HANS!!!!!!!!!! I still love you <333
Still waiting for you to change your mind…I know, I know, not gonna happen, but no one’s not called me stubborn and not meant it! -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay!!
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