Beth

@jonas

I really like the way you put that!

@godlyfantasy12

Basically, this story started out as a fun party with your characters. And then we switched it to a really crazy/chaotic but extremely FUN Role Play…and then it died after 352 pages 🙁

Jonas made another topic for the action adventure one, but I’m keeping this one as the “Party” section. All the characters woke up after a dream…[Read more]

@proncesachronicle22

WOW! That’s amazing! Great job!

@princesachronicle22

Nahim

“I have no idea. I’m unfamiliar with these people, this planet. Shall we head to the palace? Find answers?”

@everyone

I should probably explain that directly post Nanian war Nahim is gonna be very sensitive to certain things, more so than in the last rp. He will also probably refuse to help the Lillenings at…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Sorry that I haven’t explained this yet, but Nahum’s sword is a green crystal sword. At the moment, it only looks like a sword handle piece, but it can, when activated, form a green glowing blade. Again, I apologize for not specifying. He also has a gun strapped to his thigh.

Nahim

“I know no place called ‘Spires’. I am the…[Read more]

@prinspcesachronicle22

Nahim

Nahim looked at the purple dagger, than at the woman who held it. He saw her as not much of a threat, but he still had his metal hand resting on his sword pommel.

“Warrioress, amon. ” He bowed his head. “I am Lord Nahim Nayhelm, a child of Laxor, son of Master Anoran. You do not look Native, do you have any clue of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 yes she does, XD

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

Nae

Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @rae

Sef

She closed her eyes, tremors shaking her small form.

She took a step back.

And another.

And then her back hit the wall.

She was trapped.

@esther-c

I love them! They’re so sweet! <3

@esther-c

I’ve never really heard of the MBTI stuff before KP and haven’t looked much into it…but it sounds cool!

Liv

She looked at Lukas. He was so caring…so-

She felt the tears coming again.

“What’s wrong?” he asked, looking into her eyes.

“I-I-” she tried to keep her voice from breaking. “I made so many friends here…and then I’ll…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! Me too 😊😁

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 I love that!!!

Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)

Lukas

He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]

@esther-c

OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY SCREAMED AND HOPPED AROUND MY ROOM AND MY SIBLINGS WERE SO CONFUSED lol

Livia

“I-I’d like that,” she smiled at him, and then sighed, burying her face in her hands. “Fynn is never going to let us live this one down…”

@esther-c

I love him so much!!!

@hybridlore

Thanks!!

@esther-c

Love it! No big critiques. Can’t wait to read more!!

Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂

Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”

“Shh, keep your voice down.”

“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.

Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”

“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”

Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]