Beth

@everyone

Why do you guys hate first person so much?????

It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!

I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!

Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now

Ignore tag or read on!

Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉 I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.

It’s not p…[Read more]

@everyone

The only rule about charrie amount limit is that you have to be able to keep track of them all. I’d that’s none or ten, doesn’t matter.

@whalekeeper

Yes, to answer your question. Either plan out a section of the adventure, or say the color of grass and sky, then throw a hydra at them or whatever other wacky thing you want.

Like I said, chaotic idea, but fun.

2ax²z

@whalekeeper

I did not forget, I was thinking.

Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you are the author, and every decision you make is p…

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@loopylin

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

@esther-c

I don’t really think I’ll be able to help, cuz I’m completely out of my element when it comes to contemporary.

I don’t know about the first vs. third person problem, but if you have multiple POV characters, I’d recommend that you stick to…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.

And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]

@rae

I love this idea. I haven’t been on much lately but I’d definitely try to get on more to participate!

@highscribeofaetherium Sorry, spelled your tag wrong

@loopylin

When Dante returns, he will most likely find Jr in the room trying to figure out how to read the note. Jr has a vast knowledge of languages, but this language he can only speak and understand, reading is basically impossible for him (he probably recognizes words here and there, but otherwise nothing)

I feel like Sebzter Gangster is…[Read more]

I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6

So I need help.

XD

I’ve been plotting in my head for a contemporary novel that I’m really excited about. I love the concept, the characters, and even the setting so much! I just need a better structure for my plot. So far I’ve been writing random scenes, I just have a feeling that when I finally sit down to write the book in whole, it’s not gon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

1.      Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)

I felt like it was pretty realistic, but I’ve also never written anything like that before or experienced something like it. I a…[Read more]

Hey, everyone!! Just so y’all are aware, I’ll probably begin posting the next polls sometime after Easter. (:

@freed_and_redeemed

First, YOU NEED TO TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TO MY POOR RIKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sobs for him*

Second,

1.      Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)

2.      What are your t…

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@godlyfantasy12

We’ve all cheated Wyoh by sharing pics through links. Canva’s free, all you have to do is make an account and upload the pic to a design. Then share the link so anyone can view.

But if you don’t want to do that then… idk, yeah whatever 😂

@stephie

Ah, gotcha. That makes sense.

Oh, cool!!

@keilah-h

I can’t believe I missed your post!

That’s a really neat history (I’ve actually always wondered what Snakes real name is XD). I will try to catch part two instead of missing it this time XD.