@beth-torres
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 16 minutes ago
@loopylin np
Alpha
Alpha blinked. “No, not exactly. I’m a warrior, so I fight wherever in the stars they want me this time. Only time I ever thought of assassination was with some of those annoying lords in the Council, but if I did that, they’d probably lock me up again. And that’s no fun. I think they like sticking me with needles.” A shudder…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 hours, 38 minutes ago
I will need to clear this up in the story i guess. I didn’t mean all the laws, I meant more the changes in that we no longer have to sacrifice animals because Jesus came as the ultimate sacrifice. The laws changed in little ways because Hope had finally come, we didn’t have to wait for it.
I will make this clearer in the text,…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 hours, 39 minutes ago
Yeah! I am glad it is non-cannon… and I am no longer surprised when two of the same gender are shipped… (😮💨) but there is one thing worse that these people do that is WAYYYYYYYY worse than shipping siblings, or family… I can’t even say it!
Wanna know why? BECAUSE IT IS LITERALLY AND ILLEGAL SHIP!!!!!!!!! I hate fandoms…. I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 48 minutes ago
It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.
“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”
Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 15 hours, 53 minutes ago
Oh, okay. Um, I don’t imagine a beaver dam being that bad. But I know for sure you shouldn’t say it.
Hm, I feel bad for everything the jews have gone through in history! All the accounts from the Bible, the pogroms, holocaust, and modern days people trying to remove them.
But I do not agree with the LGBQ blah blah blah stuff.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 16 hours, 11 minutes ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 16 hours, 14 minutes ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 16 hours, 24 minutes ago
@kielah-h @ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore
This is the final part of Story 9.
In my writing document, I named this story temporarily as ‘Delirium’ but I would like some better title ideas if you can give me some. Thx in advance.
Five days had passed since Baron had been taken to the Handel mansion and his symptoms…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 16 hours, 43 minutes ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 22 hours, 51 minutes ago
I bet if i made Dante bored enough, he’d sneak into the school and pretend to be a student for the day. That would be fun.
lol
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 2 minutes ago
Alpha
Alpha shrugged. “She put a kid in the hospital, and thought she could take care of me too. So I stabbed her. And yes, I do often stab people.” Alpha paused, thinking about what he had just said, for the first time considering how his audience would take that information without context. “Though, it’s not just because I’m bored.…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 12 hours ago
speaking of jews, what are your honest thoughts on them? Like how to you see them?
I believe they are God’s people, and that the promises God made still apply. I don’t believe that the Church is the new Israel.
Other than them being God’s people, I don’t stand behind them. They support the lgbtq+ community last I heard, and I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Great! 😁
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 16 hours ago
I don’t think it’s wrong that you guys do that, but I am kind of wary about the fact that by confessing your sins through a priest, you are forgiven by God. It doesn’t make sense to me, because why would you not just go to God directly? I do think it can be very beneficial to tell a priest your sins, but I don’t really like th…
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 17 hours ago
I personally am disgusted by most of them
AMEN!
Kanye West recently started selling a shirt with a black swastika, just hours after releasing pro-Nazi, anti-Jew tweets. I have since removed the song from my playlist.
WAIT WHAT!!!!! sorry for the caps, but WHAT?! I did not know about this! I just knew that he existed! Nothing else!!
To me,…
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 17 hours ago
I don’t think we have to go to a priest to have our sins forgiven. Jesus is our great High Priest, and He is the One through whom our debt has been paid and sins forgiven, so all we have to do is ask Him for forgiveness and we can receive it. Now if it is a sin against another person, I do think there should be the appropriate c…
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 17 hours ago
I find those funny, tbh. XD As long as they’re not being disrespectful of the Bible or God, then I don’t have a problem with it.
Yup! I saw one that I thought was going to be disrespectful, but it actually but christianity in the light! (in a good way)
I don’t believe there’s anything in particular that’s wrong or that just because t…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 19 hours ago
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
Awwww ofccc!!!!
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 19 hours ago
But just to clarify, I don’t really ever listen to secular music. I only want to listen to music that glorifies God!
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