@beth-torres
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
“I-” I raised my not-burnt hand to begin explaining, but then hesitated.
I have to say it…. Fire Face is still running around in there.Â
He could start another round at any moment.
“Um.” I said, my heart began to race a bit.
“My cat… kind of… um…”
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
Some of the anxiety returned but I didn’t dare show it.
“I don’t know.” I responded. “He ran away.”
I took a deep breath. “Um. So, the fire…” I trailed off. Trying to figure out the right words to explain my pet. I had to face the fact – there were no right words.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
“I’m Carrie.” I said, attempting to smile. I was entirely greatful that I was safe, but I hardly ever smiled about anything.
The garden was so beautiful, it seemed the perfect place to escape from chaos. I was wrong to assume the water wouldn’t help, it soothed the pain immensely.
“I could never say thank you enough for getting me out…[Read more] -
Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
I couldn’t help but let out a sigh of relief.
At least he didn’t ask about the cat yet. I thought.
“Yeah, I can walk.” I responded. I wasn’t sure the cold water would help completely, I was almost sure Fire Face injected something into my hand, but cold water was worth a try to avoid questioning.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
They’re away from the fire but not outside if I’m understanding correctly.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
“My cat…” I replied a bit nervously. I thought that would be the moment I confessed the fire was mainly my fault. As the burning sensation in my hand intensified I thought of all the ways these people were going to kill me for burning down the castle.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hmm. I say yes. I think that’s a good ideation. But – Carrie doesn’t trust many people and swears she’s never going to have a crush on anyone, so yes! … but good luck. Lol.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*GASP*
HAPPILY DAY AFTER THANKSGIVING. 😄
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
I felt something shaking me and heard someone asking me a question.
“I didn’t mean to…” I mumbled with a groan. I opened my eyes to see someone above me, then I realized – they were asking if I was okay.
“Yeah.” I said, shaking my head, then I slowly sat up, coughing then grabbing at my hand due to a sharp pain.
I tried not to make a…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Just had a few minutes… lol.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
After I had got bitten I felt dizzy. I had to get out somehow. It was too loud for me to handle and my bitten hand was looking black and started to burn intensely.
With my other hand I grabbed a dagger out it’s sheath and jabbed it as hard into the floor as the small amount of strength I had would allow.
The dagger glowed a brilliant …[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hi! Happy Thanksgiving! I’m not going to be on here or posting till Sunday. I’ll be expecting like 100 new pages when I return. Don’t do anything too crazy or fun or I’ll send Blob fish to eat you all. Jk…. maybe.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
I began running through a crowd of people, I knew we were being attacked, but I didn’t know where to go.
My sword turned back into a little rock with a horrible screech sound. I tried to pick up Fire Face, who ran as quick as his little feet could go without being trampled, but as I scooped him up he bit hard into my hand, his teeth were…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
At the mention, I grabbed the stone out of my pocket, and it swiftly within a blink took the form of a sword.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Wait… is the fire still here or was it put out?
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Carrie
I had no idea what to do, and nothing to help with. How was I going to explain anything? Would the castle be half standing by the time I got the chance? And when I explained, who was going to get killed first, me or Fire Face?
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay. I didnt want Fire Face to burn the whole castle. XD
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I didn’t mean to make it where the whole castle would burn down… do we need to change it?
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@jonas
Nobody knowing about Fire Face might be a problem. Lol - Load More