@awsumfaith
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Loopy replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
These are all great XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
*posted six days ago*
…whoops.
I’m back now, I guess.
“Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
Ew, no. This is just for fun.
The comics were written back in the 7990s
7990s?? What year is it now? It’s only 2025 in my world.
Do you have any pets?
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper Thanks! That’s super helpful. I’m realizing that this is the kind of thing you need a really thorough outline for
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Enid replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Stopping at :55 and I think that’s enough to warrant a tasty drink and dinner. 😛
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Enid replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I want to work on a short story! If I get a substantial amount finished, I get a chocolate nutrition shake. Starting at :25.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣
I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
Yep
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.
I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I ha…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.
and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.
Now… 314???????!
And Jonathan!!!!
nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.
I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
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Enid replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.
I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Hehe unintentional pun
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I have a mystery story idea but absolutely no clue how to write a mystery:(
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It worked!
I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.
Great job!
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Enid replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
They’re not showing up on the link for me.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Gotcha.
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