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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!
If you are just sharing and not wanting critiques, that’s ok feel free to let me know, I just love giving them XD
Sometimes in various scenes with Ev and his Dad, with the whole forgiveness arc, I feel like there isn’t a distinction between forgiveness and…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
milo
“Unless you want a ventilation shaft in your skull.” Milo’s eyes widened at Crosshair’s words. “In which case I’ll happily give it to you.”
He’d thoughts it was just Aurivis that was this violent, but apparently Crosshair was too. Milo tried to focus and spoke to the man Aurivis had let go of, still wary since he had…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@gwyndalf-the-wise Lol the naming one XD
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
They both sound intriguing, but I think I…
Have a problem with indecision.
But why not cast my vote along with the overwhelming tide? Shall I be contrary enough to build it up against the current?
No, no. I think I genuinely agree. I prefer the possible struggles in the first; the family quality of a father and a daughter, and a…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c
Sure, you can tag me! (I just need to catch up a lot. XD) Congradulations on 21 chapters! -
Jaybird replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, (also known by my Middle Earthian friends as the Rangeress Aenwest of the Morningstar. By those who know the Shining Isle, I’m a little historian living in Kigor, a town about two day’s travel from Rysen. Narnians know me as that nosy cloaked lass that…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
(Ps we only get notifications you replied to us if you tag us, I’m @mineralizedwritings )
1. My favorite theme for books is action and adventure, sprinkled with humor.
Nice choice!
2. Yeah, I like snakes! Some of them look awesom!
Yeah, snakes are the best. 😃🐍🐍
3. Boom, by Italobrothersmusic, the German kind.
Cool!
How…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Cool!
Teilo is the ex-prince. Luca is a side character who is very…highly energetic and mischievous.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@orielle21
I like it! The very first part is giving me Pevensie vibes. XD -
Microphage6032 replied to the topic I finished my rough draft… anyone interested? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I like it. 🙂 And… let’s just say I’ve been in Cammie’s shoes before… 😆🙂🙁😢
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Microphage6032 replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Noooooooooo not the Dragoooooooon! Noooooooooo
Hello there. I’m Microphage6032 (or just Microphage). Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Here’s a couple of questions:
1) What is your favorite school subject?
2) What kinds of novels do you write?
3) Do you have any fan-fictions? (A lot of people here love Marvel, but I’m not one of…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I don’t write fights that often so I hope this is good…
Aurivis
“I’d happily send you all back home if I could.” Easton said. “Or I could send you…well….do the inhabitants of different worlds go to different places when they die?”
“Why don’t you find out for us?”
Aurivis snapped his jaws at Easton, who dodged, run…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Sorry I wasn’t clear about that! Yes….it is a time travel story. So, all the stories in this series that I plan to share are going to begin with a character in the present. They will then be transported back in time to some historical event. Whether they return to the present is for the reader to find out. 🙂 I don’t focus much on how t…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Greetings and salutations!
Nice to meet you. =)
I’m Gwyndalf the Wise, fellow human being, piano player, and also like to write fantasy/fiction.
1. When you say medical history, do you mean the history of medicine? (Trying to figure out what you’re referring to, XD)
2. What’s your co-written story about?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @princesachronicle22
Dante
Despite her attempt to seem tough, Corvina was clearly agitated about something. She repeatedly looked between the people in the group and… the torch? Was she scared of fire? Dante smiled in amusement. Corvina caught him looking at her.“Don’t you have more important thing…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@oreille21
Lol yeah! Let’s see what my rank becomes!
Yeah, I did pick up on it but some of that is because of some random comment you made about writing guy characters awhile back.
Also, I’m pretty aware of that happening because it shows very much in both my sister and I’s writing, it’s a major teasing point for us.
TaurenXD
Like you…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
How old is Dante btw?
That… is a good question. Maybe like 15-18 in human years? Idk.
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