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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 18 hours ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 4 hours ago
Update!
I got Scrivener, and after playing around a bit, I think I’m going to love it. I still haven’t figured out some of the quirks like how to paste into it without turning everything blue. However, I love how it has alowed me to organize each WIP into one individual file with multiple subfiles. It’s also nice to have it off line, so I can…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days, 7 hours ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 8 hours ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 8 hours ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
Melissa
“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.
“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 5 hours ago
Ayla
I was trying to decide whether to pretend I was in the Triwizard Tournament or under King Minos’ castle when I noticed a tunnel. I knelt down and peered into it, wishing I had a light. A small girl stared back.
“Hark! A human! Greetings, fellow wander! Whither goest thou?” Hopefully whither was correct. I never could remember the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
MelissaAs Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.
There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 days, 11 hours ago
E, M, 1, 13, Z
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 11 hours ago
Oh, ok.
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 11 hours ago
Praying for you all. 🩷
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 11 hours ago
On docs?
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 12 hours ago
Did you check her access to see if she’s authorized to edit?
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 13 hours ago
I was just thinking about this story!
You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?
Not really, given that I never know where I’m going with it when I start either. XD
Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guy…
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
I shall add that to my overly long summer reading list.
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 13 hours ago
You should be able to get in. My brother’s classmate does not have a google account, and he and my brother were still able to work on a doc together.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 3 hours ago
Should the rabbit lead Mel and Barnes back to your characters, or not yet?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 3 hours ago
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