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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
(also, anyone else who is reading this, what do you think?)
You have a very sensible writer voice, with hints of humor and warmth. I think because of your semi-calm tone, you don’t seem like the kind of person who would write a super intense POV scene of shame for Eric, at least not until the arc’s climax.
And from what I can…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 7 hours ago
I…have no idea, so I don’t think I’ll be much help. Have you asked your pastor?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 3 hours ago
I’d join, though I won’t be on much for about 2 weeks, until co-op is over for the semester.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 2 days, 12 hours ago
Sorry it took me so long to get back to you! I got busy and had to take a bit of a break from kp.
Nice to meet you! Army of tiny ducks? XD I love ducks lol. Those genres sound fun, kinda the same thing I do (mostly dystopian here, but I do have a fantasy dystopian)
I like birding too! What’s your favorite bird you have seen?
Yw!…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 3 days, 5 hours ago
That actually is rather accurate.😅
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 9 hours ago
“Didn’t Shakespeare land on the moon once?”-me
“Why wouldn’t I bring a sword to a wedding?” -me
”Beer, whiskey, bourbon, gin, is what I drink!” -4yo sister
Dad: “Online church isn’t real church!”
Me: “It’s like vegan sausage.”
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 3 days, 11 hours ago
Hurrah! Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 3 days, 13 hours ago
Alas, I still haven’t been summoned. I shall now go slink off to my lair and fall into the depths of despair. XD
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 4 days, 6 hours ago
I just watched the legend of Hei! Girl it was sooo sooo good! I was starting to cry at the end and like I just loved everything about it! I think it’s now my current favorite fanart! Thank you so much for the suggestion, I’ve got to make some fanart sometime lol. < 3
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 7 hours ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 9 hours ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper
Making our own website would be cool.
I have no memory of joining kp and making my account. Did we have to send in an application email or something? What was it like?
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The Ducktator posted an update 4 days, 10 hours ago
One of my sisters got hair chalk, so now all of us girls will be walking into co-op Tuesday with rainbow hair.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 17 hours ago
@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah, I’ve noticed things are slowing down. 😔 The best way I can think of picking things up again would be to update the articles, add new material.
Does anyone remember the time they added a page for a new rank of KP writers? Anyone who wrote three of either articles, short stories, or poems? It was there one…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.
I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 11 hours ago
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 14 hours ago
Awesommme, I’m glad that worked. For me, I want to add description in longer paragraphs because they have a softer sense of time, and you can afford to give the information in a solid chunk. And then like you said, actions and dialogue are shorter.
Not that I always follow my own thoughts! Buuut verbalizing this might help me stay consistent.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 14 hours ago
Yaayyy the Loops likey
Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.
So, as it happens, I am curious too. XD I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for. I have gue…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 2 hours ago
@anyone
So, I have a piano recital tomorrow, and the piece I’m playing is way harder than anything I’ve done before, so prayers for this would be appreciated. Also four of my siblings are in the recital too.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 2 hours ago
I’m so glad he’s doing better. I’ll keep praying!
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To be remembered not by flowers
One day, there was a little girl tree. Her trunk sprouted from the ground, firm and stable. She loved the summer, autumn, fall, and even the winter. Her roots took hold into the ground and grew deep and firm.
When next winter came, the wind was cold. It blew her over, and her trunk toppled. The other trees…[Read more]
That was beautiful. I had to reread it twice ❤️
I think there were a couple times when you said “women” when you meant “woman”? (I’m sorry my grammar naziness is showing)
But anyway, I can’t pick a favorite line. How do you paint such a vivid picture with so few words?
@loopylin
Thanks girl! < 3
Oh yeah, probably. It's fine lol! Grammer nazziness is only annoying when it's done for the sole purpose of being right, and I know you're not like that.
Thank you XD idk! Honestly, it's kinda a blessing and a curse. Sometimes, I feel emotions so strongly that I get all confused and overstimulated… but if it's not too…[Read more]
Yayy you watched it! I knew you would like it. Also the poem was beautiful, I wondered at one point if she tyrned into fossilized wood because that stuff is gorgeous. :]