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And a third….

STARDUST | #3

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiouwrXU/rz-t9B9jUalXqId5GE5Amg/edit?utm_content=DAGAiouwrXU&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Ehh… maybe it will work it I share one at a time…??

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STARDUST | #2 (I’ll probably redo this one)

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiKo93Bs/imGl8K73VrrSJyM910URuA/edit?utm_content=DAGAiKo93Bs&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Will it let me share my boards…??

STARDUST | #1

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiBxrnjw/cxqoRqxlF2RKoI3iiaE9UA/edit?utm_content=DAGAiBxrnjw&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Oh, there they go….

@esther-c

Yup, that’s pretty much what I was saying. XD XD Glad I could help! 😀

Wow. None of my post have been going through. Thanks a lot Wyoh.

@savannah_grace2009

I like first person, but I generally prefer third. Some first person books are great, like Alcatraz vs The Evil Librarians, but others annoy me. I generally dislike first person with multiple POVs because then I keep forgetting whose POV I’m in, which could be a problem with the writing. It’s more forgivable in romances,…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith

Hi. I’m so sorry, but I’m not keeping up very well. It was a lot to read and I was having difficulty with it and I’m going to drop out of the reading plan. I’m really sorry, I haven’t been following along and it was becoming a difficultly to catch up.

Or maybe we could try doing something like reading through the New Testament, one…[Read more]

@loopylin

I really like the outfits!

@savannah_grace2009

I think Wyoh ate your post.

@theducktator

Ok, good, I was worried that I was losing it for a moment there lol.

@savannah_grace2009

I do not hate first person, I think it can be really good when done properly (I doubt anyone else has read this book, but The Door on Half-bald Hill is an example of this ((oh man I adore that book))). I just think it’s harder to get right tha…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol I was thinking the same thing XD

@rae @highscribeofaetherium  @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @princesachronicle22

Carrie

“Your people-picking thing must be broken.” Carrie remarked, “And I’d rather destroy your castle myself than fight a war for you!”

She could have stayed, but she wanted to know that going back to her world without having to fight was at least an option, though she…[Read more]

@Esther-c

Haha, I love that scene! 😄

@esther-c

Hmm… That’s kinda how the first book in my series is… action-less…

Being the beginner-ish writer I am, I don’t really have any tips—but here are my thoughts anyway… (ok, maybe they’re tips…?? idk idk XD XD)

(It is hard to say much without knowing anything of your novel though… 😊)

Do you have a basic-ish overall plot at al…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

It’s third person. And first person with multiple POVs drives me crazy as well.

@loopylin

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

@esther-c

I don’t really think I’ll be able to help, cuz I’m completely out of my element when it comes to contemporary.

I don’t know about the first vs. third person problem, but if you have multiple POV characters, I’d recommend that you stick to…[Read more]

@esther-c

I generally like third person more than first person. Both are good though, so do what you think works best. Just because it’s popular doesn’t mean it’s best. I can’t help much with the rest, because I’m having the same problem. Some books that do this well are The Penderwicks, The Vanderbeekers, Cheaper by the Dozen, and The Melendy Quartet.