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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@sam-kowal Oh, good!  Nice to know someone besides me thinks its fine.  Its also helpful knowing a guy agrees, cause most of the help I get is from girls. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira's profile was updated 8 years ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@sam-kowal Thank you SO much!!! Â Very helpful. Â Do you think my MC would feel shy or intimadated going back to see his family, though he is overjoyed as well?
The personality my MC has is where he doesn’t really like to show his feelings, until he just breaks down.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@catwing Thanks!!!
@filewriterbase13x Oh, goodness!  Daeus and Josiah arguing?  Notta taking over?  I cannot imagine that! 😀 Everyone has truly lost thier minds!  @daeus is king, @aratrea is the Wiser! 😉
Oh, @the-real-kapeefer this is your time to usurp the throne!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x I can see it in my email, but not here.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@salome01w4g Praying!
@alia I know that feeling- don’t like it when I do!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine I want to see you sing!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I love The Tombs of Anak. Â It never fails to scare me, though I have read it many times. Â But it has a fantastic plot, and the ending is impactful.
Yes, my Dad is a pilot.  My sister likes planes a lot more than I do.  If my Dad was not a pilot, I doubt I would have any interest in airplanes at all. 😀
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine My favorite?  Hmm.  I like Trapped at the Bottom of the Sea and Escape from the Islands of Aquarius a lot.  The Tombs of Anak is really good (and scary!) and The Secret of the Desert Stone is a good one.  Its hard to pick a favorite.  The Deadly Curse of Toco-Rey is super creepy.  😛 I think Flying Blind is the most boring, and my Da…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Oh, awesome! My piano teacher wants to take us students to play at a nursing home sometime. 🙂 and OH MY GOODNESS YES POST A VIDEOOOOO! 😉
Probably a song by Dylan Laine. I just found her on YouTube and she’s a Christian singer/songwriter/musician. Here’s a link to one of her songs, it’s pretty cute…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine Oh, I thought you meant novels in the romance genre. 😉 yeah, I ship characters occasionally. Hmm, I would say that mild romance can make a story more interesting, like in Seekjustice’s sequel, with the situation between Zac, Justice and Chessy. Other than that, I really don’t know what advice I can give 😉
I just thought of you the…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@filewriterbase13x oh, you wanted us to leave comments in your google doc right? I was just reading it and leaving all these comments and then I couldn’t remember whether or not you asked for that.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine I started another corner and responded to your post there 🙂
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Jenna Terese started the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Guys, we go through these way too fast 😛 It’s awesome.
Writers’ Corner #16!
@seekjustice @ariel-ashira @filewriterbase13x @jane-maree @jess-penrose @alia @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @dekreel
Rochellaine, thank you for your sympathy for Rin, though she would’ve probably wanted the chocolate 😛
hmm, I ‘m not sure how to convince someone to…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine should I go ahead and make a new one, or are you doing it?
Rin’s, uh…………okay, I guess. 😉 She’s a character after all, her life is torture 😛
How’s Uncle Bill? 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice Anyone on?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@sam-kowal Any advise?  I need a guy’s input once in a while! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@ashlyvye Yes, and thank you for your help, Ashly! Â And you too @rochellaine
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice *fist bump* 😉
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@ashlyvye 😀 Thank you!  Thats helpful.  Except, the parents would have told him (and he would have understood a great deal anyway) what was going on.
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