Nil A.

@booksandbeakers

So I think I get what you’re saying. 😅

Are you asking what happens to the people inside The Orb, or outside The Orb?

@godlyfantasy12

*blinks*

Woah. That playlist is looooong!!

🤣

That’s awesome!!!!

Santa Baby- Lindsey Stirling

You listen to Lindsey Stirling!!! Girl, I looove her music!! (Even tho I’ve only heard her Christmas songs XD)

@freedomwriter76

Gratitude by Brandon Lake (Chosen Performance Version)

*gasp* You’ve watched the Chosen?!?! Our famil…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Awesome!!

@the-rest-of-y’all

I love your stories! Their each unique in their own way!

@lightoverdarkness6

Well, no one ever finds an exact picture of their charrie, but yeah, at least it’s pretty close 😊😉.

Ikr?! It was so difficult to find face claims for Corie and Ty after writing like half of their book. XD But, finding pics for Ev and Ami were easier, since I hadn’t written any of their story yet. They were still pretty new…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

🥳 So glad you’re back!!!!!! I know I’ve only known you on here for a bit, but I missed ya!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Our group is getting a little big. Do you want me take a pair of my charries and have them find someone else? Or should I keep them? I really have no preference. I just know that you already have a lot of charries to kee…[Read more]

@ava-blue @mineralized-writings @arien @freedomwriter76 @felicity @starofthenorth

Here is my playlist for…[Read more]

@sarafini

That sounds really cool!! I’ve never known anybody who has written an autobiography before.

The only advice I can offer, is this:

Read other auto/biographies. Then you can see how they wrote it. Secondly, when you’re starting at your childhood, you don’t have to document everything. Think of some really important moments that happen…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Corie

I looked at the fennec fox curiously. Maybe he was a Lyabrinnian… or at least like one. His mouth didn’t move when he spoke.

Jocelyn smiled and I smiled back at her. She seemed like a nice girl. I started down the hall as the others followed.

I rubbed my arms and shivered as I felt a cold draft blow by. Ty seemed to not…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oh! I really liked that. I wouldn’t change a thing! It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting!

I think that was what I was kind of thinking in my head, I just couldn’t put words to it. 😅

@felicity

Oh my word!!! That’s super cold.

I think it’s cold in a lot of the US because of the arctic front. Yesterday was terrible. It didn’t go over 3 degrees Fahrenheit!! Today is a little better. Funny thing is, a week from now it will be 58. 😆

I expect we’ll see a polar bear soon

I wouldn’t doubt it. Lol 😂

@lightoverdarkness6

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynamics are my favorite!! I could also feel the tone: Sure, they were in a bad situation, but it didn’t get them down all the way, bc they had each other.

I’m already really liking your cha…[Read more]

@orielle21

I enjoyed it!! It was cute and simple!!

But for some critiques, here’s what I thought:

So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.

Secondly, I felt as if the dialogue was unnatural. So to help with the flow of dialogue, I s…[Read more]

So, this is kind of what Dao looks like:

Well… 🤔 I think “deus es machina” is the right term. 😅

@felicity

I know!!

I really like Dao! I know that the fact that he suddenly showed up and saved them is kind of deus es machina, but it had to happen. 😁

I could probably ramble more on why I write… but… we’ll just keep it at that. 😜

@arien

Awesome topic idea!! I’ve been meaning to start something like this, but you did it for me!!

So, pretty much for as long as I can remember, I loved anything to do with stories!! I wrote them in school or for fun; my bff and I would play games after church about stories we made up; and I enjoyed putting on plays. I just loved it!! That c…[Read more]

This is ending up so much more different than I had originally intended. I love it!!!

I guess that chapter ended up longer than I had thought. XD

@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Welp… I guess posting it on Wednesday didn’t happen. 🤦🏻‍♀️ 😅 But here it is!! Sorry for making y’all wait so long. I may have forgotten about it… *hides behind pillow* *throws pillow, clears throat, and resumes poise*

Anywho, I put a little bit of the end of the previous chapter…[Read more]