Anatra

@queen_of_alvastia

Um, what just happened?! O.O

That was interesting, and it definitely had me hooked while reading it. I’ll have to think over any edits etc., but for now, that’s pretty good.

@freedomwriter76

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, y’all! You’re really encouraging, and I’m glad you like it!

Yes, she is a bit hopeless, she knows deep in her heart that she’s headed for spiritual bankruptcy, but she’s seen so much already that she’s almost dead inside. It has a lot to do with the certain kind of things she’s involved in. Nasty, ugly…[Read more]

So, for tags! (Let’s see if I can remember them.) If I didn’t tag you, don’t feel like you can’t say anything, or if you know if someone who might like to help, then feel free to take them.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @joy-caroline @power @ANYBODY

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@lydia-s

Ooooooooooooooo! Like it is said above, this is ingenious!

Ok, so I will probably be on here a lot….

This picture, if it goes through, is actually of a chapel in the underground cities created by soldiers in the trenches in France during WWI.

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Eewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

I quote Viktor.

Did they just…

kiss?

*retches into trash can*

Just teasing. 😉 Although that was my reaction to the last little bit, especially the last sentence, there were a lot of reactions packed into that scene. It got rather tense.

And I love the dialogue! And that Ezra took the bullet for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.

@lydia-s

Ooo, here’s one I found recently.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.

The barrack…

Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.

The cross piece and pommel on his sword.

Why did I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwww.

My heart has melted.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Yes, I’d say this has escalated. XD

Alyona

Screeches and hisses filled Alyona’s ears, driving rest from her mind. She flew to her feet, heart pounding, looking for a broom – anything really.

Two animals were locked together in feirce combat. Around them hovered two children, faced stricken…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Aww, Naja is adorable. And she even looks a little like Riker!

I’ll go ahead and respond.

Viktor

Morning was here. Viktor lay perfectly still, watching the sunlight soak the walls.

His back ached, but his head had escaped injury.

He’d woken once in the… Earlier morning, just as he was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(sorry for my late response. I don’t check KP as much as I should. XD)

But YESSS!!!!! You should!!! I hope you enjoy them. A NIGHT DIVIDED WAS AMAZING!!!!!! *high fives* I think it’s a must-read for any historical fiction lover!!!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

Rat-tat-tat

Screams, loud garbled voices. Zeroing in on his target, safety off.

Another kick shatters the door. Three more steps.

His feet pound down the stairs, racing against time. Flames snatch at his legs, slowing him down.

Another door swings open sending a stream of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I concur! That sounds like a good plan to me.

@daisy-torres @r-m-archer thank you both

yeah i know amazon isn’t great to support but if it works… gotta pick the lesser of the evils and difficulties i guess lol

I’ll check out LuLu though

@godlyfantasy12

Grimmy? Oh my, that’s… adorable. I can see how Lyn is with nicknames.

(Of course they stay snarky. Brothers are snarky.)