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Jayson

Shy: being reserved or showing nervousness or timidity in the company of other people. The look on the girl’s face, Eleanor?, wasn’t exactly what I would call timidity. More…fear, fear that would rather stab me than shake my hand.

“Ah, that’s alright, I’ve been there before. Good to meet you, sirs.” I nodded to…[Read more]

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Eleanor. XD
Jayson

“Who are you?!”

Civilians. Great. No firearms necessary. I latched my watch back on my wrist and scrunched my eyebrows at the young lady. Faint British accent, over aggressive manner. Probably scared out of her witts if I had learned anything in Psyc.

Raphael slid his hands in his pockets with a sma…[Read more]

Note: we are still sorting out Raphael’s family history/denomination, so, besides knowing that they’re very observant, that’s kinda in the air. While he does end up messianic, he’s not quite there yet.

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These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.

Jayson Barans

Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]

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Alright, first quick descriptions.

Jayson Barans

Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.

Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.

Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.

Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]

@overcomer

Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.

I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]

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Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.

Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.

*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*

*Crickets*

The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]

*a stalker appears from the shadows*

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Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0

And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?

*Glances at characters*

*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*

@freedomwriter76 ADSKJKSAJKSJKJK HE NEEDS IT XD IF U CAN PERSUADE HIM TO BE HUGGED LOL HE STRUGGLES WITH PHYSICAL TOUCH :’DDD

SAHKSAHKDASHKAHKAHK GIVE HIM MY LOVEEEEE

@freedomwriter76 tehe then i’m happy to indulge you <3

heh well uh he was severely abused by his parents (physically mentally and emotionally) and he has a lot of physical mental and emotional scars… poor boy 😢 he is so wonderful though, he’s just absolutely lovely and has so much love for his friends and he’s very full of life and just……[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 haha youre good

he’s 15 years old, korean, lives in japan with his adoptive big brother ^^ has brown eyes and light pink hair in need of cutting. super skinny and small. very very much a child at heart. the saddest happy person or happiest sad person you’ll ever meet. he’s so so so so happy but also so so so so sad. loves nature,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 hmm then you’ll certainly be crushing hard on youngho because he has C-PTSD, ASD, SPD, BDD, OCD, depression, anxiety, and ADHD

@freedomwriter76 LOL yes all of my characters have problems. i don’t know if there’s even one who doesn’t. but one of my characters has like uhhh eight mental disorders hahahaha whoopsie dont know how that happened

@thearcaneaxiom

ahh, set theory was actually pretty decent, i can vibe with you on that one for sure. it’s one of the easier topics out there lol

wow! your writing seems very intentional and full of meaning, just by the name alone there

i’d agree with that, info dumping is abominable and i try to avoid it at all costs 😂 there are definitely…[Read more]

@esther-c

ooooh that’s so fun!! do you listen to classical music at all? hehe

@freedomwriter76 awww that’s awesome!

haha you’re good, i’m sure i’m not much older either 🤣

@loopylin awww thank you so much!!

some of them are hehe, the drawing of the muscular dude + sunglasses dude + the curly haired guy are mine! otherwise it’s fanart :>

@euodia-vision

awwww thank you so much!!!! usually i just draw from imagination, although sometimes i do use references if i am drawing fanart ^.^

(hehe hello!!! it’s nice to…[Read more]

@grcr awwwww thank you!!!!!!!!

anyways HAHA sorry for spamming everyone, for some reason i couldn’t put them all in one post

also i promise my art is better than that i was just too lazy to dig up anything other than sketches LOL but i thought id share those 💗