@alia
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@sam-kowal Thank you SO much!!! Â Very helpful. Â Do you think my MC would feel shy or intimadated going back to see his family, though he is overjoyed as well?
The personality my MC has is where he doesn’t really like to show his feelings, until he just breaks down.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing Thanks!!!
@filewriterbase13x Oh, goodness!  Daeus and Josiah arguing?  Notta taking over?  I cannot imagine that! 😀 Everyone has truly lost thier minds!  @daeus is king, @aratrea is the Wiser! 😉
Oh, @the-real-kapeefer this is your time to usurp the throne!
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Catwing replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Thanks.
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Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
filewriter@base13x wrote:
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part Five: King Who?
I ran with the dog, who said her name was Skredder, and the purple giraffe, Kaya, at my side. B-bot and Catwing flew above us. I was of course not sure of where we were going, but the dog seemed to…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Sorry I left For a while and didn’t tell you. I love both these parts! Of course Wonder creatures deal with lost minds on a regular business. They tend to hide in closets, under beds, and in sock drawers. If not there you could then try your left shoe. 🙂
I must have really lost my mind… I even said I don’t think. O.O
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
One thing to keep in mind with this is his response, too, although you’ve probably already thought that out. Obviously he’s not going to be shocked but he will probably be very emotional/happy. The other character reactions depend a lot on what the other characters are like.
I would expect his mother to be very emotional and to be…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I can see it in my email, but not here.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@salome01w4g Praying!
@alia I know that feeling- don’t like it when I do!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I want to see you sing!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice I love The Tombs of Anak. Â It never fails to scare me, though I have read it many times. Â But it has a fantastic plot, and the ending is impactful.
Yes, my Dad is a pilot.  My sister likes planes a lot more than I do.  If my Dad was not a pilot, I doubt I would have any interest in airplanes at all. 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Oh, I remember now. The Tombs of Anak was the one I read and hated. 😀 Wait, is your dad a pilot??? That’s awesome, I love, love, love planes! Also, I majorly dislike stories set on planes, because there almost all completely wrong 😀
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine My favorite?  Hmm.  I like Trapped at the Bottom of the Sea and Escape from the Islands of Aquarius a lot.  The Tombs of Anak is really good (and scary!) and The Secret of the Desert Stone is a good one.  Its hard to pick a favorite.  The Deadly Curse of Toco-Rey is super creepy.  😛 I think Flying Blind is the most boring, and my Da…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writing Prompts in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’ve sung in churches and randomly in public before, (not formally in public, just walking around and singing,) but never in a nursing or retirement home so I’m hoping everything goes well! 🙂
That is a very cute song!!! 😀
I use emojis a lot too, which is really funny, since me texting an emoji is considered an event by my…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, awesome! My piano teacher wants to take us students to play at a nursing home sometime. 🙂 and OH MY GOODNESS YES POST A VIDEOOOOO! 😉
Probably a song by Dylan Laine. I just found her on YouTube and she’s a Christian singer/songwriter/musician. Here’s a link to one of her songs, it’s pretty cute…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Well, I’ve been trying to find time to sing at a nursing home sometime in the near future, so when that happens I might post a video or recording of that on my website… 😉 No promises, though. 😛
Sure, but right now it’s the old one which is not so great looking and not updated very well. I’m working on redoing it, and when I fi…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, I thought you meant novels in the romance genre. 😉 yeah, I ship characters occasionally. Hmm, I would say that mild romance can make a story more interesting, like in Seekjustice’s sequel, with the situation between Zac, Justice and Chessy. Other than that, I really don’t know what advice I can give 😉
I just thought of you the…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Sorry, like I said, I’m out of chocolate. 😉
How do you ship Chessy and Justice if you don’t like romance?! 😛 No, I’m not talking about actual romance novels. I’m talking about people who would likely refuse to read a book if there’s any possibility that two of the characters might have mild feelings for each other, even if t…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x oh, you wanted us to leave comments in your google doc right? I was just reading it and leaving all these comments and then I couldn’t remember whether or not you asked for that.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I started another corner and responded to your post there 🙂
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