@acancello
Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I can see that…lol
Does she ever come around to anything more than tolerating him?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins so when Hemlock “properly introduces” Leo and Cross…….do you think she’ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr ahh ok makes sense!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins ouch, sounds like it must’ve hurt then
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-GRCR- replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks!!
One question: Where and in what time period is this supposed to be set? Because you refer to them as warriors and have them fight with old-style weapons, implying either a past or far future time period, but then refer to car accidents and computers (which I assume are computers like the one I’m typing to you on) like it’s set…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Crosshair is all silver, but Leo has a bit of blue on her spines….Also, Cross has a few scars and several of his tail spikes are snapped off due to all the torture he’s received.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh, and I like your planet/moon names.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins There’s one thing about Hemlock telling Leo the news that you’d have to put in the story beforehand.
If she’s with him, he’s most likely already experimenting on Crosshair, and shows him to her while he’s locked up (or being tortured….😬……sounds like Hemlock to do that though). Since the Empire confiscated his armor when they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr great job!!
One question: Where and in what time period is this supposed to be set? Because you refer to them as warriors and have them fight with old-style weapons, implying either a past or far future time period, but then refer to car accidents and computers (which I assume are computers like the one I’m typing to you on) like it’s set…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok, awesome. Thanks!
Ami
Ami smiled at the short girl who gave an awkward wave.
“You must be my roommate.” She stood and walked over to her. “My name is Amidala. A lot of people call me Ami though.” Her eyes drifted to the girl’s green tail that flicked around. Not wanting to look rude, she met the girl’s eyes and offered another smile.
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes plzzzz!! (If you still wanna ofc)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
My mind is blanking out on me for what to RP, so y’all can keep going back and forth if you want while I try to come up with something XD
Ooh, interesting. I know dogs can dream sometimes, so I don’t know what it would be like for other animals, but it also sounds like Chase still thinks/acts like a human whi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Can you remind me what Ellie looks like? I think I know, but I’m not sure.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Easton: *momentarily hopes that girl-who-his-author-hasn’t-named-yet also thinks he looks awesome on a sand bike* *finally answer question* A lot of kids at school have them. We live in New Mexico and the desert is basically our back yard.
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Esther replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
That is so amazing!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Going back to the discussion of Twinborn (from several months ago, I know), I have recently decided that my favorite combination is Allomantic Electrum and Feruchemical Steel (Steel is just the best Feruchemical power.
First off, Electrum actually is more useful than I thought. So far, we’ve only seen it get used to negate Atium, but it a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Going back to the discussion of Twinborn (from several months ago, I know), I have recently decided that my favorite combination if Allomantic Electrum and Feruchemical Steel (Steel is just the best Feruchemical power.
So, Electrum actually is more useful than I thought. So far, we’ve only seen it get used to negate Atium, but it actually works a…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
🙃
For some reason I thought Leviticus was way longer than it is. Lol.
LOL me too!! I was genuinely surprised when I saw only 27 chapters…
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