Allison

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you!! 😊😊

alright! thanks!

(XD XD)

@esther-c

Oh noooooo….

Now you guys have me worried that my story is too preachy….

ahhhhhhhhh!

I always listen to Christian music, like upbeat music that motivates me to write XD

the words don’t bother me because I am one of those people who can listen to music and do ANYTHING, even read while listening to music….lol

@grcr

That is soooo sad!!! And soooo sweet! I love it!

Also don’t feel bad tagging people! I love reading your writing!

(though I always feel bad too, so don’t worry you’re not the only one xD)

@loopylin

Enjoy! <3 Do you have any recommendations?

@rae

I kinda figured he doesn’t chill emotionally XD But it was worth a try anyway.

Hmmm…a pacifist and a man who was made to be a war assassin…now I see how they clash…

Oh, L-O-L-O-L-O-L (Sorry, I’m playing with the keys, being lingo savvy XD) I semi-forgot to mention this, because I often don’t see any point in mentioning my character b…[Read more]

@rae

“If there’s trouble, Hugo’s probably there.”

Bro’s a literal pacifist and he ends up in the middle of multiple violent situations XDXD

Jr. just needs Physical Ed or something to chill him down, because I promise you, Hugo will get an emotional heart attack from stress if he has to worry about one more thing.

@godlyfantasy12

Ehh Hugo would have apologized anyway XD He tends to believe he owes people for slightly inconveniencing them

Hugo

“You’re Paxton, aren’t you?” Hugo’s eyes glowed under soft, maple-dark hair. “I’m Hugo Angelo. The new kid in the dorm.”

Pax didn’t seem to recognize him. He held his sleeve over his eye for a moment and sighed…[Read more]

That was my love letter to Plot. Plot, you are an underrated thing. I love you <3

My post was deleted twice… *pure pain* Okay, okay. Here it is all over again.

Scenes are so hard! But this is what helps me. Doesn’t mean it will work for you, but you’re probably looking for anything at this point XD

Before Aha-Moment: The Hero needs to grow. How does it show?

After Aha-Moment: The Hero figured it out. How does that show?

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Thank you @grcr 😊

@elanor

Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Thank you!! 😊

It’s crazy that I just happened to write a poem on war and peace as well.

How interesting!! 😅

I like yours a lot as well!

Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

It’s crazy that I just happened to write a poem on war and peace as well.

I called it Freedom’s Cost

I look around and ponder peace

As I stand upon a blanket of snow

But I also see a history 

That there their blood did flow.

A river of crimson covering the ground 

To defend our beautiful land.<…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @esther-c @anyone-and-everyone @anyone-interested

Hi!!

I always feel bad tagging people to read my works, for some reason. So you don’t have to read this if you don’t want to… I won’t be offended. 😊

Anyway… Here is a scene from my book. heh heh. I really love it right now…[Read more]

Some more ideas:

• Leo comes across Emerie once or twice. They don’t interact much, but Leo tires something daring and probably dumb, and Emerie warns her not to get on Hemlock’s bad side. Or, maybe she’s the one who Leo asks if Hemlock’s her dad, which she obviously answers no to.
• Crosshair shows up to Tantiss in much the same way he does in…

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@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @rae

I don’t normally talk backstory, but this is a Sebzy-gremlin backstory song. …I can’t really explain why without spoiling, and spoilers take the fun out of writing for me XD But it has accurate lyrics and the perfect vibe.

Pure Imagination – Kathleen (Or the original Wonka version. But this…[Read more]

@rae

The Troublemakers sounds like a team made of youngest siblings ;P

@loopylin

🙂 You are sweet

Sebzter

“You’ll be invisible, I’ll be untouchable. Brilliant. Any ideas?”

@godlyfantasy12 @rae @freed_and_redeemed

Eeeyyy here we go 😛

Hugo

Hugo tried to hold in his laughter as he enjoyed Nar’s embarrassment.

Someone bumped into his back. He whirled around with a huge, shark white, mania-dripping leer (as one d…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins all righty!

Ideas (You can take or leave any of them):

• Leo awakes imprisoned on a starship in hyperspace, Crosshair guarding her. She is going to confront him, but he’s called away before she can really get anything out of him, or some other stormtroopers take her away or something. They take her on an Imperial shuttle to…

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