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Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Aww, I love that so much!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, there! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
Thank you for the suggestion of the trickster, but I kind of want to keep it as a curse if I go with the Sabtah origin story, trope or not. Why? Because of the irony. Sabtah was trying to escape curses and got cursed yet again. Perhaps some of what I was thinking is that Sabtah wanted to be separated from God, and while he could…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Hold on, let’s back up a bit. It’s great that you agree with most of what I have said, but I would like to know more about the Tritheist heresy you mentioned. Are you saying you do not believe The Father, The Son, and The Holy Spirit are not one God but three separate Gods? Another thing I know The Church of Jesus Christ of Lat…
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
*dabs tissue at eyes* I’ve been waiting for this say so long lol
Yesss Riker ask those questions!! Don’t believe the lies anymore!!
I love the scene and it’s a nice change of pace compared to his poor scenes where he’s more questioning his value to anyone
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @koshka @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else-lol-XD
Recent writing snippet!!
(this is the scene I’ve been working on, and thought I’d share a snippet here!!)
Would Isaiah, Fin, and Jennie lie? Would Isaiah lie about the fact that God was merciful? Would Fin lie about his past and how…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
*takes cookie*
AHHHHH, I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!! 🥰🥰😭
but Tyler
😭😭
but EEEEEEEEEE, i love it so much!!!!
I really love both of their arcs!!! <3
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@smiley So happy to hear you’re doing well, girlie <3
And also….
I AM LOVING THE NEW FANFIC!!!!
😍😍😍😍😍
(and I’m so happy to see you <3)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 4 months ago
@theducktator yep your ducks would fit into this category!
@linus-smallprint It depends on the story. I use them throughout several different story universes and their roles are different in each one. Often I use just one species for each story. I do have some set rules for each though:
- Ailurids often have clan-based societies, because I…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I just finished reading it, too, and wow. That was really good! Your fight scenes were awesome! Amazing job!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, there! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
@linus-smallprint Personally, I think of that idea a lot too–the concept of Earth being the “first world” God created, and then He created other worlds, and filled those with creatures somehow.
Kinda like Narnia, where Aslan brought humans in from Earth to rule it in The Magician’s Nephew.Â
Now here’s the question. Was Everwylde always i…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae wow naga families are that big??? that’s crazy.
also Tenz’s story is sad, but he sounds like a really interesting character! I like him already!
(Is he related to any of your other characters besides Alpha? Nahim, Silvanis, etc…? Just wondering, because I feel like I see a pattern here.)
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Here’s my story. It’s going under major reevaluation right now though, so keep that in mind if you want to read it.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, there! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
This story is not about overcoming addiction, it is about overcoming sin (you are not the first to mistake it as this). While others do get addicted to magic, loving the power it gives them and how it makes solving their problems easy, my protagonist will never be addicted to magic. Warning, if you want to read my book someday,…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
<img src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui_temp/170frlj9gh179xj5w9oyjkscdmb3akk2.jpg__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey Rae, I read the first two chapters! 😛 I don’t think they’re a waste at all. I just put together a little overview of my initial reactions.
Thoughts on Nahim’s personality:
The strongest Nahim trait here is depression. Solid, unwavering depression. XD He thinks about his family constantly, and not much else. Personality-wise, he strikes me…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
The church I attend is non-denominational, but I would say it is in a group of churches coming out of Grace Community Church that feels very close to becoming their own denomination considering it has things like its own hymnal (Hymns of Grace) and Psalter (Psalms of Grace). I’m not sure what it would be called though. Gracits o…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, there! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
He is on a quest for redemption, and fears being drawn back in. Towards the beginning, he tries to redeem himself by becoming a hero, but as the story goes on, he instead learns to trust in The Saviour to forgive him and to help him overcome temptations to magic. So it’s a story about redemption, forgiveness, sanctification, a…
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Keilah H. started the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 4 months ago
Hello! I just created this topic to talk about sentient creatures that aren’t humans. @linus-smallprint this is for you!
also I don’t know who else to tag lol
I have several non-human sentients. Usually they take the place of humans in stories, but in a few stories I have humans and dragons living alongside each other, often with the dragons…[Read more]
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