Abigail.M.

@abigail-m

So sorry to hear that! Praying!

@madelyn

Aww girl! No actual fire! I’m disappointed… 😜😆

Sorry, I won’t be much help in this as I seem to be having the exact same problem! But I’m excited to hear people’s feedback.

@power

Okay I’ll try again. 😆 (It’s been cantankerous and hungry lately it seems lol)

The poem about the baboons sounds funny. I like the balloon one.

Heres one of my favourites of my recent ones. I was minding my own business buisily studying my Physics lesson when this came to mind. It’s doesn’t have any particular meter or rhyme so a bit odd…[Read more]

@faith-q

Lovely story idea! Honestly, aside from the tropes Joy and Daisy mentioned, it sounds unique to me! And, like they also said, even those tropes are common, they are still incredibly enjoyable (Honestly, the more I think about it, almost every story has a “chosen one” of some sort, even in the Bible). So, in my opinion, you’ve got a great…[Read more]

@emily_d

What’s your book about if I may ask? 👀

You know I’ve never read much of anything in the way of poetry. The only poetry I’ve read is what I’ve been assigned for school in the past couple of years (well other than kids’ nursery rhymes ). So I’m not exactly sure how I picked it up. 😆 Yes, I have published a couple on KP. Here they are:…[Read more]

@faith-q Oh that sounds like such a cool idea!! I have read one book by Jennifer A. Nelson called “Mark of the Thief”. You might enjoy it, although there is some Egyptian mythology stuff in it. But it’s a good book and sounds kind of up the ally of your book idea! (Although not too similar, it just reminds me of it haha)

I really like that book…[Read more]

@power

It looks like it ate my reply when I sent it? Did it?

@power

Haha! Sounds like a fun poem baboons bickering in a tree. lol

Oh, I like it!

Here’s another one I wrote. This was a random thought moment after a Physics lesson. It doesn’t exactly rhyme and is a sort of weird pattern. With lots of alliteration, but I like it lol

The Least are Largest

Just small things we are

We are the smallest of…[Read more]

ah looks like it ate my first reply lol

@emily_d What’s your novel about? Is it in the real world or fantasy or both? Are there cool creatures (hints at dragons and such creatures)?

Haha, my family puts everything on pizza. The usual pizza is cheese (several kinds), olives, pineapple, capers, anchovies, peppers, and some sort of meat with the…[Read more]

@power

A desk job has never seemed more enticing. I guess my dream of becoming a advertising street sign holder will have to die. Its a so sad, but I must do it for the arts…

But in any sense, thanks for the tips! I will definitely be using them.

As for your question about what rhymes with orange, it’s Sporange. An uncommon, but very real…[Read more]

@emily_d

Welcome back! It’s awesome to have you back!

I don’t know about you, but there is always this fresh sense of excitement when I get back into writing after a break.

Is there anything in particular you are excited about with getting back into writing?

@joy-caroline

Take your time! If anyone understands how busy life can get, it’s me. 😉 So, no worries if it takes longer than you expect. I’ll be excited to read it whenever! 😀

@keilah-h

Oh, really??? How cool!!!

@e-k-seaver

AGH, THIS IS SO EXCITING!!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats, Em!!!! I’m so happy for you. XDXDXD <33333

And no worries about not being active. My participation on here isn’t particularly consistent either. 😅

@e-k-seaver

WOOHOO!!!!!!!!! Congrats, girl! So happy for you. XDXDXD <33333 *showers you with confetti and chocolate*

@daisy-torres

Ooo… Thanks so much for the suggestions! It’s always nice to get directed towards good books. 😀 Jennifer Erin Valent’s trilogy is great with sibling-like relationships. The two girls aren’t actually sisters, but they treat each other and grow up like sisters. It’s a Christian series, but it does get pretty dark/sad by book three…[Read more]

WOW, THAT’S AMAZING!!!!! CONGRATS!!!! It must be so exciting to finally have a book published. I can’t wait to check it out!!!