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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”, I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦♀️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I have just read the prologue, and yes, it is very much just the events of the fall, but still intriguing. I’m curious, since this is referred to as Earth and Andromeda, are these not just allegorically, but literally the events of Adam and Eve, just called by different names, then upon being written, oral tradition shifted it…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22
I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅
N’nesha
“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned…
Neshe: What… happened…?
Nele: What’s he doing…?
I sat up, still a bit dazed. Bucky stood in the middle of the hall,…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Rose in Wonderland: A Novel Idea I’ve Been Developing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
@crocheter12 I love this idea! I would totally read this!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Exactly! My siblings are 7 (my little brother, Ethan) and 11 (my little sister, Hallie). Hallie does my chicken chores in the morning cuz I’m at school hehe
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@trailblazer @thearcaneaxiom @acancello
if you’re interested, here’s some of my writing if you wanted to give me feedback 🙂 if you don’t want to that’s okay, its just I’m trying to get beta readers to critique what I have so far before I move on to any other chapters.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
It’s hard for me because my little siblings are still homeschooled and they don’t understand what I go through, and so when I get home they expect me to play with them and hang out and stuff like that. but when I get home, I mentally cannot handle people anymore and what I really need is to sit in my room and write and listen to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Figuring out how to forge friendships between two characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 8 months ago
another thing I’ve learned is that if I pray that Jesus will give me the words and inspiration to write what He wants me to write, than the words come a lot easier as He helps me overcome obstacles with my writing. Good luck!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Figuring out how to forge friendships between two characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 8 months ago
Well sometimes friendships start out with the two people HATING each other, and that’s what’s happened to me several times actually. Then, one step at a time, they start being a little nicer, for example, talking to one another, or sitting by them at lunch, or stuff like that.
You definitely don’t have to use my ideas you don’t want…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol! Same to you 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Hi Janessa,
God asked me to go to public school as well! Or, at least he told my parents it was time to put me in public school. Thanks for the encouragement! Yeah, I am definitely an introvert too. My sister is an extrovert and she can’t understand why I need space when I come home from school! Haha, little sisters…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I will let you know if I ever decide to try it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
I also like badminton!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
No, I don’t blog, but I might try it someday!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Hi! You’re going to love KP! 🙂
My name is Sara and I’ve been writing ever since I was about eight years old, at which age I wrote about a 20 page story on Word (looking back, there are some major plot holes, but oh well, i was eight!)
I’m writing an allegory about a fantasy world called Andromeda. I’m trying to get some “beta…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
you’re good, haha!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m looking at your blog right now! 🙂 great ideas! I commented a couple times
I was dizzy yesterday too, but not bad. I’m glad I don’t have stairs in my house 🤣
Yeah I turn 14!
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