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@folith-feolin

Right now I’m looking into BYU Idaho

@freedomwriter76

Thanks for checking in! Life’s been good, I’ve been trying to work on college application stuff, something I’ve been procrastinating for a little to long😅 As well as working on a medical research project for my dad. How about you?

How cool! 😄 The synopsis is intriguing…

@hannah-beth

Hi Hannah! Welcome to KP!

I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I’m currently working with my sister on a fantasy multiverse project.

Questions:

You mentioned that you write fantasy occasionally, do you like hard or soft worldbuilding? (Soft being more concrete…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Wow, you’re creatures are really cool! I like the Phantom and White Lie

Thanks! Yeah, I’m trying to get into the themes of good and evil with them.

@folith-feolin

Odd, for some reason I have your message on email, but it’s not appearing on the actual forum, is that just me?

Personally, I’m not much of a horror guy, but I do find t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! I’ll try to get it out today!

@whalekeeper

Fantasy Creatures are so fun!

I love dragons, because of what they are and what they can be, and what they can represent is so expansive.

I also love a bunch of creatures from Brandon Sanderson’s writings, like the koloss and kandra in Mistborn (I won’t talk about what they are because that’s actually kinda spoilery for the series,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Looking good! But I’m wondering now about the security of the underground. Of course Amara would get past everyone that knows her, but can anyone that knows its location really able to just walk in? Is there any kind of identification catalog or something, because it won’t always be people she knows that’s guarding right?

@keilah-h

Thanks! I’ve never seen any of those before, I’ll have to check that out!

@kyronthearcanin

Sounds good to me👍😅🤣

@freedomwriter76

Thanks! Hmm, I could color it to look more floral🤔

@felicity

Thank you! Yeah, a lot of people are saying water related things, waves, sharks, stingray, I could maybe try changing it to increase that vibe, it might also work as coral. Excellent question, believe it or not, with a…[Read more]

@esther-c

That looks really cool!! 😄

Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD

Thanks! It could be a flower of some kind😂

@otherworldlyhistorian

Someone else told me it looks like shark teeth, not the first thing that came to my mind🤣

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Hmmm it reminds be of a blurred s. Or chain links, vaguely. Or a braid.

Yeah, I was…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

I think the dye is green, is he going to look like he fell in Dagobah swamp water again? It was me, thanks lol!

@awsumfaith

😮🤣

@otherworldlyhistorian @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @mineralizedwritings @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else

Happy Easter y’all!!! I just made this random thing, not sure what it is, but it looks cool, what do y’all think?

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!!

This is a time to remember Him, what He did for us, and indeed how He rose again! I love how you quoted that scripture specifically, because my sisters sang a duet of RISEN, such a beautiful song to remember Him! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCQsK1t9EKY

@felicity

(No I didn’t forget about this, 🙂 I just had a busy week.)

(No worries, I feel ya😆)

(Ok! Though we will differ, and I’m going to state what I believe and why, I will try to be as respectful as possible. You’re right. I can’t speak for everyone, but the reason why it’s such a big point to me is because its pretty much what my whole Chr…

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@kyronthearcanin

Sorry I took so long to respond to this.

So at this point you’ve basically displayed plainly that she’s the shifter. Though you said that she was shifting reality, but it looks more like it’s only illusionary magic, convincing one individual at a time of what reality is, without that actually being reality. Perhaps that is only…[Read more]

Readers:

So what happens next?

Writer:

… Want to know about this random dish of food I made up for the world that I promise is completely relevant?

@awsumfaith

Looks cool! I don’t think I can make any meaningful critiques or suggestions yet, because you’ve given very little. I would second Kathleen’s comment though, but you have full authority over how you name things. If it helps, I like making languages for my worlds, and come up with all my names from those.

@esther-c

(I wouldn’t know what to ask. 😂)

Sorry, did I make any sense, or did I sound like I was blabbering gibberish?🤣

Is the donut edible??

(Hmm, to ask if the donut is edible could actually be an interesting question. If it can be eaten, then that means that one must be able to exist outside of the fundamental domain, meaning the shape of t…[Read more]