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    Allison
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      @savannah_grace2009

      Awww! I love it!

      "Would you kindly...?"

      #166778
      Sara
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        @acancello

        tysm!

        (hey, do you have any Hugo+Vikki scenes you could post????)

        Lukas&Livia
        #Lalbert
        Sef&Chase
        #HOTTOLINE
        LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

        #166937
        Allison
        @acancello
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          @savannah_grace2009

          Maybe….😏 Ill find some later!

          "Would you kindly...?"

          #166970
          Sara
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            @acancello

            YES!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait!

            Lukas&Livia
            #Lalbert
            Sef&Chase
            #HOTTOLINE
            LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

            #166972
            Sara
            @savannah_grace2009
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              *me casually fangirling over Hugo***

              Lukas&Livia
              #Lalbert
              Sef&Chase
              #HOTTOLINE
              LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

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              Allison
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                @savannah_grace2009

                Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.

                ——-

                He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you thought!”

                She squirmed out of his grasp, “Thanks, really.”

                He gave her an admiring look, “You are kinda pretty you know.”

                She rolled her eyes and turned away, but I saw a smile creep over her face.

                ———–

                So yeah, Hugo is kind of the annoyingly/funny/ cool guy XD

                "Would you kindly...?"

                #167035
                Allison
                @acancello
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                  In this scene they are trying to break into a giant facility to save their family’s. Hugo being his annoying self, lol!

                  ——-

                  “Now are you ready?” Hugo asked impatiently, testing the strength of the handcuffs.

                  She hesitated, “Yes, I think we are.”

                  “Kiss for motivation?”

                  “In your dreams Walton.”

                  She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his shirt and began to drag him towards the building, “Let’s get going!”

                  ———-

                  And heres right after Hugos dad dies😭 This shows you how Vikii really cares for him, despite how she acts.

                  I looked at Hugo with tender compassion, his face was still buried in the couch and his shoulders were shaking.

                  “I’ll stay here with him,” Vikii said soothingly, “You three should go. When he’s ready we’ll catch up.”

                  I stood up and knelt next to Hugo, “Hugo, were going to go. I’m so sorry…” My voice broke and I blindly stumbled up and into Paxtons arms.

                  Sam whispered something to Hugo before he backed up to us.

                  “Well, this is goodbye for now.” Vikii said, stroking Hugo’s hair as Paxton opened the front door, “Goodbye guys! Stay safe!”
                  We called out our goodbyes as we filed out of the door.

                  —–

                  Description of him…

                  I knocked on the door and it was instantly opened by Hugo.

                  Hugo was sixteen with a crop of longer brown wavy hair which he always kept a baseball cap or beanie on.
                  “Come on in,” he greeted with a slight smile, “We got a surprise upstairs.”

                  —–

                  And in the beginning when his sister Jean is home from Lifeguard training.

                  —-

                  “Hi Shauna! Hi Sam!” She greeted, casting aside the tablet and leaping up to give me a hug. She paused for a second, contemplating whether or not to hug Sam, but in the end she did.

                  “I missed you guys!” She gushed, spinning around, back towards the couch “It was great to be gone, but even greater to be home.”

                  “And that’s the surprise,” Hugo muttered to Sam trying hard to smile.

                  Her sapphire eyes sparkled with mirth as she flopped down on the couch, “You don’t need to be so grumpy Hugo, you should be happy I’m home.”
                  “I’d be even more happy if you went back,” he teased, and laughed when she snatched his baseball cap off his head.

                  —-

                  Wow that was long 😀 Hope you like them!

                  "Would you kindly...?"

                  #167040
                  Sara
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                    @acancello

                    “Kiss for motivation?”

                    “In your dreams Walton.”

                    She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his shirt and began to drag him towards the building, “Let’s get going!”

                    I love that!!! Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

                    Lukas&Livia
                    #Lalbert
                    Sef&Chase
                    #HOTTOLINE
                    LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                    #167041
                    RAE
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                      Nahim & Nora

                      Forever

                      Maren grinned and nodded at Nahim, who grabbed Nora’s hand and pulled her around the corner of the building.

                      “Nahim, wha-” Her breath caught in her mouth before she could finish. The three suns of the Realn system were setting at once, their light intertwining.

                      Leahae, the fair white daughter, blended her rays with Diala, the bright mother. In turn, Diala held hands with Lahoom, the blue one. Purples and deep blues, oranges and bright reds, pink-tipped clouds and long shadows soon to come. The rare occurrence of the most beautiful setting of the suns in all of the Realn System.

                      Silhouetted against Diala, Maren watched as the two absently held hands, helmets hung from their belts. Nora’s long hair, set fee from its bonds, billowed on the chilly wind, catching the rays of colored light. Nahim’s black hair was also the play-thing of the wind.

                      Nora stood transfixed, awed by the beauty rolled out before her. She grasped Nahim’s hand, finding it shaking slightly.

                      “Are you alright, Nahim?” She asked as she stared into the rainbow of colors. Nahim let go of her hand and grabbed both of her shoulders, pulling her to face him. Both his hands were shaking.

                      “Nora, I’ve never told anyone my father’s last words. They have been locked up inside, sacred to me. His last words were ‘I loved you from the first.'” Nahim struggled to keep his voice steady. His hands shook so violently that he released Nora’s shoulders, fingering instead with something in the pocket of his belt. He opened his mouth to continue, but no noise came. The rays of light had caught the little hairs that never behaved around Noranay’s head, making them almost seem to glow. It reminded Nahim of an angel.

                      Nora’s lips parted slightly, her eyes hoping for what she wanted Nahim to say  next. Nahim said nothing, but pulled a ring from his belt. It’s band was of silver, it’s stone like a million glittering diamonds set inside one polished stone. It gave off it’s own light. Finally that young voice broke the silence.

                      “I love you, Noranay.” Nora’s face burst into a smile, every atom beaming with joy as she gave Nahim her right hand.* After the ring slipped onto her finger, she hugged him, and kissed him. He didn’t have to ask, she already was shouting the answer.

                      “Yes! Yes, Nahim.”

                      They watched the setting of the suns the rest of the way through, Nora leaning on his strong shoulder.

                      As they left while the shadows gathered more deeply, Maren jumped out and punched Nahim in the stomach.

                      “Welcome to the family, brother! Many more where that came from.” Nahim growled in mock aggression and displeasure, Nora laughed. Nothing in the universe could take away her merry mood that night, she was to be Nahim’s, forever.

                       

                       

                      * The right hand is called the “hand of the heart” by Realn, so they put engagement and wedding rings on the right ring finger.

                      "You need French Toast."

                      #167042
                      Sara
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                        @rae

                        Aww! So sweet!

                        Lukas&Livia
                        #Lalbert
                        Sef&Chase
                        #HOTTOLINE
                        LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                        #167044
                        RAE
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                          At least Nahim knows how to be romantic…Alpha doesn’t. Thankfully, Emmie is very understanding.

                          "You need French Toast."

                          #167045
                          Sara
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                            @rae

                            Lol!

                            Lukas&Livia
                            #Lalbert
                            Sef&Chase
                            #HOTTOLINE
                            LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                            #167054
                            Allison
                            @acancello
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                              @savannah_grace2009

                               Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

                              Lol! Thank you!!

                              "Would you kindly...?"

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