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    SeekJustice
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      @dekreel 🙂


      @valtmy
      Got it. Thanks so much!

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

      #76086
      Catwing
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        @dekreel @seekjustice @valtmy I finished the post for tonight! So I’m going to bed now.

        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

        #76087
        Jenna Terese
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          @seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel Who’s still on? I think I’ll be on reading Seekjustice’s book a while, but I may have to leave any minute. How is everyone?

          I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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          #76088
          valtmy
          @valtmy
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            @catwing

            Bye!


            @seekjustice
            @dekreel @jenwriter17

            I’m on if any of you still are.

            #76089
            Jenna Terese
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              @valtmy I’m on! Hi 😀

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              #76090
              SeekJustice
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                @jenwriter17 @valtmy

                I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

                INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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                Jenna Terese
                @jenwriter17
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                  @seekjustice Hello to you as well. 😉 How the third infinity book coming?

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                  #76092
                  SeekJustice
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                    @jenwriter17

                    Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

                    INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                    #76093
                    Jenna Terese
                    @jenwriter17
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                      @seekjustice That’s good; one of the things I struggle with most is creating an interesting plot that actually makes sense.

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                      valtmy
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                        @seekjustice

                        Haha hope you can make sense of my blubbering rants! 😛


                        @jenwriter17

                        Are you one of the beta readers as well?

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                        Jenna Terese
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                          @valtmy Yup! *bows*

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                          #76096
                          SeekJustice
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                            @jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.


                            @valtmy
                            Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

                            INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                            #76097
                            Jenna Terese
                            @jenwriter17
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                              @seekjustice @valtmy

                              Sorry but I will have to leave now. Bye!

                              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                              SeekJustice
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                                @jenwriter17 Bye!

                                INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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                                valtmy
                                @valtmy
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                                  @jenwriter17

                                  Bye!


                                  @seekjustice

                                  Good to know I’m not the only one that thinks so then. But worldbuilding is very crucial (one could say it is the heart of) for a dystopian story. And any changes you make (esp in the tech level) can cause ramifications in your plot (e.g. suddenly the conflict or problem doesn’t make sense because it can be solved or avoided via tech).

                                  Since Les Mis was based in a historical time, I’m expecting a modern retelling set in the future to update and change the way events happen and the way the characters do things that reflect the advancement of technology. BBC’s Sherlock which puts Holmes in modern times with cell phones and all) is a good example.

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