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  • #135911
    Esther
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      @kyronthearcanin

      We don’t have a lot of forests where I live. We’re kind of just surrounded by farmers’ fields, so I guess I’ll have to find somewhere that does. Oooh… What about a forest in the mountains? That would be perfect! 😄

      Same here. Suburbs, cities, and farmland. XD

      Yes!! It would be!! Our family visited Colorado I think 2 summers ago and it was absolutely beautiful!!! I could totally live there. 😄

      Yes, Dune is very fun to write. No one really ever knows what he’s about to do 🤣

      😂😂

      Everton sounds awesome! 😃

      He is! 🤣 Here’s his moodboard so you can see more about him:

       

      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

      #135915
      Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
      @kyronthearcanin
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        @esther-c

        Okay now I KNOW I like him XD. Especially the quote from Winston Churchill!

        Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

        #135931
        Esther
        @esther-c
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          @kyronthearcanin

          Ikr?! XD XD

          Would you like to see his best friend/crush?? 😏

          (She’s so sweet!)

          • This reply was modified 1 year, 9 months ago by Esther.

          Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

          #135934
          Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
          @kyronthearcanin
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            @esther-c

            I would love to!

            Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

            #135948
            Keilah H.
            @keilah-h
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              @kyronthearcanin I love that character design!

              I’m Keilah, by the way. Here are a couple questions that I hope no one has asked yet:

              1. Ever written a fanfiction? If so, what was it about?
              2. What are your opinions on reptiles?

              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

              #135965
              Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
              @kyronthearcanin
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                @keilah-h

                Nice to meet you, Keilah! Thanks about the design! 😃

                1. I have, in fact, written fanfiction (none that I would want to share, lol). I have done a character in middle earth (LOTR), and elf in exile, and a few others, including a character inside of the Wingfeather Saga- Tali, one of the twisted creatures in that one forest I forgot the name of XD

                2. Reptiles are awesome! I have an entire race in my WIP based on lizards. They’re evil, but still… Also, dragons are the best reptiles. Best real reptiles? I’d have to go with snakes.

                Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                #135975
                Esther
                @esther-c
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                  @kyronthearcanin

                  This is Amidala! (or just Ami). She’s really sweet but can be sassy. 😉 She’s the one who reminds Ev that he is not a failure. (Because Ev thinks he is because of how his parents treat him. Though he doesn’t try to act like it. 😢) Her struggle is trusting God all the time and relying on Him, instead of relying on herself, those around her, or how good she can be. (And she’s more predictable than Ev. XD)

                   

                  Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                  #135977
                  Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                  @kyronthearcanin
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                    @esther-c

                    Oooooh I love that! They definitely seem like a good match. Poor Ev ☹️

                    Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                    #135979
                    Esther
                    @esther-c
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                      @kyronthearcanin

                      Oooooh I love that! They definitely seem like a good match. Poor Ev ☹️

                      Thanks!! 😊

                      Yes, they are!! 🥰

                      I know. 😢 But don’t worry, eventually he comes to the truth. (After a long journey, lots of impulsive decisions, someone else’s redemption, Ami’s encouragement and prayer, and a few near-death experiences, though. XD)

                       

                      Your character Rina interests me! I’d like to hear more about her if you don’t mind. 🙂 (And Dune too. 😉 )

                      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                      #135982
                      Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                      @kyronthearcanin
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                        @esther-c

                        Woohooo! Yay for Ev! At least they weren’t actual death experiences. 😅

                        Rina was captured by the Serpenree (a race based off of lizards) when she was very young, never knowing if her parents survived. She is a halfling, born of two races, the Arcanin (a bear-like race, each with their own kind of magic) and the Lupinari (a race based off of wolves). Most are wary of the Arcanin, but the real source of conflict comes from the fact that the Serpenree, and some from the other races, hate halflings. She grew up with many guards, only one who tolerated her, though he wouldn’t admit it (Quelin). She ends up meeting another Lupinari named Sorren, and  finally, one of my favorite characters, the one and only Dune.

                        Dune is a Felisaro (a race based of off cats) who has wandered in his ship, the Ombryn (the Felisaro have a secret language. Ombryn means ‘good fortune’ in that tongue). After his father and uncle tried to assasinate the Felisaro king, they were executed, and Dune and his family were banished. He left with books (given to him by his father) sacred to the Felisaro, and has been hiding and running ever since. His ship crashes on the Serpenree planet, Lacertilia, right next to the place where Rina is imprisoned. While he is nervous at first when he learns she is half Arcanin, she eventually grows on him.

                        The book in general is about Rina, Dune, Sorren, Quelin, and other friends they gather along the way deciding to save all the prisoners on Lacertilia, not just Rina. Rina learns to trust in the Celestial Phoenix (a metaphor for God) and to sacrifice what she wants for others. Dune learns to trust again. (Oh, and also, eventually they figure out that Sorren is actually Rina’s uncle).

                        Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                        #135983
                        Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                        @kyronthearcanin
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                          @esther-c

                          Also, I put the first chapter up on the novel critique requests forum, if you’re interested. 😉

                          Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                          #135984
                          Keilah H.
                          @keilah-h
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                            @kyronthearcanin I WANT TO READ THAT SO BAD NOW. IT SOUNDS AWESOME! Can you tag me where you posted the first part of it?

                            Also, yes, in response to your earlier questions. Dragons are undeniably awesome, and snakes are cool. If you’d like I can show you a picture of some!

                            Oh, and the Wingfeather Saga’s twisted creatures are called cloven. Some of them are actually kinda cool if you ask me.

                            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                            #135985
                            Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                            @kyronthearcanin
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                              @keilah-h

                              Thanks!

                              I’d love to see some pictures!

                              Oh, that’s right, cloven. Some of them are absolutely cool! Most of the ones that are named, actually.Arthram, for example, was a cloven at first, I believe. Then there was Elder Cadwick, and Arundelle, and of course, Esben. I felt so bad for him, but I was glad to see Arundelle and Arthram together again. 🙂

                              Also, like I told Esther, I have my first chapter up on novel critiques if you’d like to read it!

                              Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                              #135986
                              Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                              @kyronthearcanin
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                                @keilah-h

                                Sorry! Missed the first part of that I will totally tag you lol 😅

                                Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                                #135991
                                Keilah H.
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                                  @kyronthearcanin Yeah, Artham is awesome. I traced the picture of him that was in the book and digitally colored it once.

                                  Here’s some dragon-person art!

                                  This guy is stretching like a cat. He’s one of several main characters in my fifteen-book fanfiction, so I draw him a lot.

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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