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July 18, 2022 at 2:25 pm #113540
Lol idk what I am doing. My charactor is kinda stupid
July 18, 2022 at 2:48 pm #113544@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
Everyone had stepped back when new new stranger had appeared.
Another one?!
How many people were in this place?!
Nyx seemed to agree.
”ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! MORE OF THEM?!” The fox’s ears were flicking and his eyes ticked back and forth between each person.
The one group had expressed no desire to harm them, but Nyx was still wary, as usual. As for this new stranger…he looked….
Scary.
And November definitely didn’t blame the fox this time for his hissing, especially when it seemed this group they’d just met, also had no idea who this person was.
“Love, chill!” Lyn said, her eyes now on her fox. She seemed less concerned with the strangers around her, and more with the unpredictable nature of Nyx.
Arabella
Ara backed away, standing closer to her own group. “Z-Zlatan?” She whispered, overwhelmed with everything. The young man had become a bit of a safety to her in this strange place, along with her friends.
She stepped back and looked at November, before gently grasping his hand, giving it a gentle squeeze.
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#ProtectSebJuly 18, 2022 at 2:50 pm #113546@keilah-h ehh I think the group will be too big and out of control ya know? Also there’s only 2 villains in the RP, and one is an “antagonist” not a “villain” per day XD if that makes sense
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#ProtectSebJuly 18, 2022 at 2:52 pm #113547Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@hullofellowhumans. Oh. Okay. XD
July 18, 2022 at 2:53 pm #113549I think @koshka or @elishavet-pidyon should go next
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#ProtectSebJuly 18, 2022 at 3:40 pm #113551@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
It may be getting a bit wild… We’ll have to see.
As for not being on late at night, that’s okay. I shouldn’t be on late. 😉
ARE WE MEETING CROSSHAIR TOO? I’M A LITTLE CONFUSED. I went ahead and write it as if we were, but I’m not sure if we are, so I didn’t really pick up after Godlyfantasy12.
Viktor
There were two men behind the first. One stepped out. “Easy now. We’re not going to hurt y’all.”
Then a woman stepped out. The lady who sang.
“He’s right. ” Her voice was soft, gentle. “We don’t know where we are, and we were just trying to find a place to sleep. We’re not going to hurt you.”
These were definitely strangers. Viktor removed his hands from his sword hilt and clasped them loosely behind his back.
“I’m First Lieutenant Ezra Roberts of the US Air Force.” The second man smiled warmly, as if his title made any sense. Which it didn’t. “This is my girlfriend Eva Goldmann, and this is our…friend, First Lieutenant Riker Schind.” Viktor looked from one to the other, then back to Ezra. “And that is…”
The younger man politely interrupted, “Private Mikkel Winston, King’s Mariner 2nd division.” then bowed.
Viktor nodded back.
“We’re not going to hurt you.” the lady, Eva, repeated with a smile. “It’s okay. Now, who are all of you?”
‘Who are we?’ Viktor’s head swam for a moment. It was late. He didn’t know what to say.
Alyona’s little hands wrapped around his rough ones. A silent whisper. I’m here, be strong, brother.
He took a breath.
And about jumped out of his skin.
Some strange man had walked out into the open. Clad in armor, he walked with a menace. Although he didn’t look Dorwinian, he might be a mercenary. A spy.
Viktor stepped backward, pushing Alyona into the shadow of a nearby clump of trees.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 18, 2022 at 3:52 pm #113552Not that I don’t want to meet Crosshair! XD I just realized how that sounded.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 18, 2022 at 5:00 pm #113555@elishavet-pidyon yes we are I believe
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#ProtectSebJuly 18, 2022 at 5:05 pm #113556Okay, good!
I may add an extension, if @Koshka is taking a break.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 18, 2022 at 6:49 pm #113557@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Sorry y’all.
Mikkel
Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.
Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?
Where was he?
movement caught his attention. Another stranger.
“Who are you? Where is this place?”
something about this new…soldier terrified the youths. He knew Ezra and Riker’s pistols were out, ready as needed.
Good.
Mikkel strode forward.
Zlatan and Vulkasin
“Z-Zlatan?” Ara’s voice quavered.
The fear in her voice burned fury. He stepped in front of them, handing his shield to November. “Use it.” No knowing what this man’s weapon did.
“Hey sirrah!” the young man in light brown was standing next to the brothers. “Don’t point that at anyone, hear? At this range I can’t miss.”
Sirrah? Not exactly something he would expect from this young comrade.
Vulkasin laughed.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkJuly 18, 2022 at 7:20 pm #113558That’s all right. Nice response. 🙂
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h Koshka,Who’s next?
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 18, 2022 at 7:25 pm #113560I think @keilah-h might need to go with crosshair
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 18, 2022 at 7:54 pm #113562@godlyfantasy12 what do you mean? He’s my character already.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
July 18, 2022 at 9:20 pm #113565Go on! Write his reaction! This is gonna be great!
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 19, 2022 at 2:20 am #113567@keilah-h yea I mean u need to rp next 😂 cuz he’s ur Charrie, so we want his reaction
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