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Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?
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I want to know where the boy’s shirt comes from, it’s quite amusing to me. 🙂
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A walking echo becomes friends with a kid who is generationally traumatized by suitcases and green haired women.
A new god learns what office life is like, falls in love with a Volkswagen bus, and spirals in the complexities of self fulfillment.
A woman afraid of Picasso-style art teams up with a boy to figure out why his face is so flat, and the two of them accidentally become cosmic keystones.
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I like y’all’s, they’re pleasantly confusing and intriguing. XD
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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?
[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
How old are you?
“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my body or my head. There’s a newspaper clipping about me at a music festival fifty years ago. I… don’t even know how long it’s been or how it works.”
Do you have a favorite comic book character?
“Captain Memphis isn’t bad. The really cool thing about Memphis is that he’s a harbinger. He collects powers from our world’s dust rings. The comics were written back in the 7990s but they’re more accurate about the rings than people thought.”
[Thinks.] “The last books I read were Harrowing Life, Cant of Lipstick, and Deepworld IV. Never thought I would read books with those titles, but they were pretty good.”
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I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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Boom, finally caught up
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I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ slave.
As for the latest chapter. Maybe I was focusing more on Sef’s actions than her thoughts – because we have seen her in the same mindset throughout the entire book – but she did get up and spend time outside. That’s a step in the right direction. Before, she just stayed put.
I realize you’re thinking about Sef’s emotions, but as the reader, I guess I’m paying attention for any change or development.
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My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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