@whalekeeper
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Allison replied to the topic What do I do if my book sounds awful? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Of course! Here it is! (Sorry its kind of long, I just love to talk about it 🙂 )
Trigger warning!! Scary!!!!!!!
Shauna Sarah Smith, a fourteen year old girl lives in Windy Pines with her two older brothers and her parents. She enjoys her life there in Windy Pines. Her best friend, Jean Walton lives six houses down on the block and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @light
Meant to tag yall up there ^^
Yall I just got some actual manga pens!! They are dip pens, so a little messy but like they are sooo fun! Doesn’t Kaine look so good in anime vibes?
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Allison replied to the topic What do I do if my book sounds awful? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you! I guess I am trying to get perfection on my first draft. 🙂 I will tag you if I need help brainstorming!💗💗💗
Well it seems fake, because everything seems to be to good to be true for the kids. Right now all the power in the world is out and they managed to take a shortcut through the woods (seeing no one) and…[Read more]
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Allison started the topic What do I do if my book sounds awful? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @keilah-h @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @everyone!
I have been writing and adding a lot to my WIP and its been going great! I have it all planned and organized, but I just need to write it. Which is hard. 🙂 I re-read what I had written and thought “ugh, this is really…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge
Beta
Ready for theater–or drama–or it really didn’t matter. It would be fun whatever it was called.
She wondered what they’d be doing today.
She opened the door to see a few other characters, but not nearly as many as she’d thought would be…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Dude
YOU KILLED ME
AH NOOOO! I always kill people… this is not a good habit…
*attempts to revive you*
XDXDXD But FIIIIIINE, I’ll do it… gimme like half an hour to write and eat my spicy lunch pockets… which are very good… and which you can’t steal… because they’re mine…
YAY!
*glares* How dare you try to withhold pockets from me?!?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper lol
@everyone else we doing electives after this? I might rp for my characters then….haven’t been here much lately.
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
i have not been here for awhile so idk what to rp. 😂
*points at Whaley*
she can do it.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper lol!!! Yea, fr!
Mother gothel is actually some of the Inspo for November’s dad, Riven.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper basically.
Zolten never really loved his own wife, but she loved him. He always pined for her twin sister (who loved his brother.)
But he was always jealous of his brother (even as a boy) and it grew into hate, so his love being in love with his brother didn’t help matters.
But yea after her mother dies, he takes Lyn.
He does “…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Ooooh the name Brittian is cute!! *Slips it neatly and unobtrusively into folder*
Haha, well my dad will appreciate that. 😂 People always mistake it for Brittany and we’re always getting mail that says ‘Ms. Brittian’ and he’s always like 😑
Oh she’d probably love it, she’s only seven XD
Ah, well yes, she’ll probably like it then. XD…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
Thats just how all writers feel🤣
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper basically….he’s just not a great guy. Manipulative, a gaslighter…
He set out to murder his brother, but ended up murdering his sister-in-law (who he was in love with.)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper sure! I do wanna RP as pax more but not entirely sure what to do…?
I want to interact with Calvin, Marcel and Wolfie, but don’t really wanna RP individually as Aramis and Edrich?
Like I wanna have conflict with them
i just don’t feel like RPing as anyone besides pax at the moment lol
also Zolten…yea…not a good dude. He…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
Exactly lol 😂 that’s how I feel.
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @acancello @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @everyone-else-on-here
So, I’ve always had this pet peeve about cliches, including romance cliches. I guess I’m wondering … does anyone have any romantic cliches they can’t stand? Or am I the only one?
@acancello So cute!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello oh yea definitely typing it all up for future drafts lol! I’m just writing the zero draft by hand! Decided to try that out since I kept getting stuck.
also I’ve been writing small-ish to get more words down.
@whalekeeper OOOH!!! I feel like I’ll love him! He sounds just like my kind of Charrie.
So my Cecily is a jester: wears…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper aww! @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else
ill probably RP as Pax after y’all’s class is over
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! I hope you get better also! I’m feeling better now, so I’ll be up and walking today.
Maybe just count the pages like Whalekeeper said. Do you write small, big or in the middle? Maybe then you can estimate how many words you’ve typed, like count one page and estimate the rest. Are you going to type it before…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper 🤣 ya ya I know, it’s just this book in particular mostly 😂 kinda hard to change it tho, tbh, but I’ll make sure they have some good moments, mostly in bonding with Lyn and Nyx, as well and Lander, and maybe Cecily (when they’re not a bit skeptical of the two maybe being suspects XD)
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