Enid

@whalekeeper

I was pretty much thinking the same thing as smiley since we have a fair range of different genres. Like, a fair mix of different dances, like ballroom dancing, line dancing, freestyle, and maybe swing? I’m obsessed with swing music right now, lol. Just anything the characters would be accustomed to in their own worlds.

Yeah that s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Food is great 😂

I’d be done for that! Though you’ll have to remind me which of my charries are in that RP because I don’t really remember…😅

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision @calyhuge @freedomwriter76

Uh, not that this detail is really that important, but Lois’ eyes are gold-brown now, not green.

Felicity

“School dance,” Marcel said flatly.

Lois and Felicity exchanged a look.

“Um – Marcel? Can I talk to you for a minute?”

Babs and Marcel slipped away and Lois did the same, finding his…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I do that too! Or at least I try to. Or sometimes just snippets of a character arc. It makes it a lot more fun and keeps stuff moving. Putting Dante in the character castle and having him interact with Steve and all the other characters actually helped me a ton in developing his character arc for the actual book.

Also (eke), why are…[Read more]

@rae

You’re totally welcome to join our group if @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 are alright with it 😊

You just gotta be patient though since it’s a bit slow moving right now just so you know

@whalekeeper

Are you saying our groups should meet?

@whalekeeper What does Babs look like? Does she have wings like Marcel?

@calyhuge @freedomwriter76  @euodia-vision

Felicity

“Who are all you lovely peeps?”

“Friends, snack thieves, clumsy eavesdroppers.” Felicity tossed away another empty chip bag and grinned at Babs.

“I’m Felicity.”

Lois had stood and walked to the door to look at the chao…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Awww *hugs you back*

Well you and your charries cheer me up too. ❤️❤️❤️

@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different…

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@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.

CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
Mandin adjusted the thick band to the satchel over his…

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@whalekeeper I doodled a somewhat alright looking Marcel reading a comic book

@whalekeeper ik this was an old conversation but I watched all three guardians of the galaxy films several weeks ago and they were great!! I agree that Rocket’s backstory was really well done (so sad the way he lost his friends!!)

@smiley

Anyways I just needed to say that and say thank you to all the people who encouraged me even when I was writing that, and I feel like I’ve grown as a writer and we all have to start somewhere

You’ve grown SO much girl! It’s been amazing to watch! ❤

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

I was actually looking at some of my old art the other day a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

<33 agreed

@whalekeeper

Hey Whale, thanks for taking the time to explain! Yeah, I wasn’t looking for a lot, a simple few words to say your busy or something is better than simply disappearing inexplicably, so thanks for setting a moment of your time aside to say that.

I’m really sorry to hear about your mother. That’s really gotta be hard for your family.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks girl

I do feel that I’ve matured some but I think just in general I’ve changed a lot

And I think we call all relate to hating the things our past selves did XD

@whalekeeper

I think there were roughly a hundred people! I wonder… although it’s not likely 😅

Wouldn’t that be cool! Was yours also on the 13th?

@savannah_grace2009

I should have the next scene done by tomorrow for the RP 🙂

@trailblazer @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings

Aww guys you’re so sweet! Thanks! <3

I don’t have in person friends, what you see here on kp is about what I have aside from my sister, who I’m pretty close with. And yeah it’s super scary but guess what I just talked to somebody today 😝 and she wasn’t a family member, and I recognized her from my…

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@rae

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.

Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.

@whalekeeper

Also about the critique on…

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