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@whalekeeper

It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

Thanks.

But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)

Also, I really, reall…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh, fabulous question!

Let’s see.

In Heirs of Ashes Alyona was originally the MC, but I ended up changing the sibling’s age order and put Viktor in her place. Then he kinda became his own person. It’s funny reading back to some of those old RPs with him. I mentioned his scarring and trauma in almost every post because I had just…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

It, indeed, was Lucy. She tumbled unceremoniously from the mass of black feathers. The crow shifted its attention from the shiny silver, to her, and she ran, the crow chasing after her.

Gabriel’s blades were out in a moment, boots digging into the ground as he r…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The problem is not what I want to write, I just genuinely hate my writing style right now.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

As the crows above cackled and argued, Gabriel’s attention was drawn to something silver falling from the tower. A crow dived after it, and among its black feathers was a spot of color on its back. Gabriel cal…[Read more]

@whalekeeper you said it better than me, I echo your sentiment.

And after over 12 hours, I return.

@whalekeeper

I had to pull out a plot device

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

The shadowy form of the bird faded slowly into the mist, and Gabriel’s heart sunk. He couldn’t wait, he’d have to hope the crow kept its steady direction, and enter the maze to pursue it. He adjusted his mask, pulling the red ribbon t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It might be a little bit before I reply, I need to think and my brain has died. Sorry 🙁 .

@whalekeeper

hehe yeah it’s fun! I should post some of my current art sometime bc that one isn’t the best representation of it lol

@looylin

Thanks! : 3

Lois

Lois fished in his pocket for his key as he stood in front of his new room. The bedroom door was made from dark wood and had a brass handle and knocker. Both the door and the brass fixings had a few simple designs on them, the knocker being the most complicated. It was in the shape of a small bird, so that it looked like it was pecking at…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Gabriel has ornithophobia now. I’m making this so hard for him

So mean lol. My poor innocent little charrie

All good, I’ve done worse to him…

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

Gabriel swung up the wall on the ampitheatre again, watching the bird fly away, looking over the many passages of the maze, hoping to find a way to follow. As…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

omc like when we were doing the Character Party RP…that was insane, like I would check KP at least 10 times every day 😭😂

@theducktator

ik what you mean…writing’s been hard for me lately :/and I’ve been busy too!

@whalekeeper @loopylin

i love pulling up old discussions and reminiscing old times…not to mention making my…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @hybridlore

Hi I know it’s been a really long time since you guys have seen Tauren.. it’s been a long time since I’ve drawn him too! I haven’t been drawing much recently except for some realism portraits (Which has actually improved my overall art a lot) but recently I’ve been wanting to finish some of my half used…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*lays prone under a giant snowbal*

“But…” A faint voice whispers, “Should I write Fiction, or work on homework?”

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

“Lucy!” His heart pounded in panic, a hammer inside his ribcage. He was helpless to rescue her, his blades weren’t for throwing even if he tried. He had no projectile weapons. He looked around frantically, and his eyes alighted on pieces of broken stone on the ground. He dropped down, hoping the bird w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel climbed up the wall himself, but instead of looking to the southeast, his attention was raptured by something more south. “Flying creatures. Those won’t be fun to fight.” After watching them for a few seconds, he finally looked for the hill, barely making it out through the silver mist. “I see t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

He wasn’t sure what to do, so he stayed where he was and listened to the wind. He caught strange scents in the invisible wisps, most he had never smelled before, a few he vaguely recognized, but couldn’t decide how. His gaze wandered to the trees, then he turned to Lucy, whispering softly in case she w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel blinked. He had no idea what that was supposed to mean. When she hid her face, his eyes softened with concern, mask still around his neck. “Are you okay? Did I ask something wrong? Are you tired?”

@whalekeeper

Np!

That’s cool. Do you think it does that because your circulation changes?

No idea. My big brother has a birthmark that looks almost exactly the same on his neck, and it does similar weird things where it gets darker and lighter. Not sure if its for the same reason mine does, I’ll have to ask.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai…[Read more]