Enid

@whalekeeper

Lol, thanks!! 😊🤣
It for real looks like either me or my mom, it’s so weirrrddd!

@whalekeeper

Okay, reproduction is allowed, but only through government selection.

Yes, I do have that under control.

If you define marriage as a promise to stay together, Ethan could still make a promise to his girl in front of his church, and it would be a marriage in the eyes of God. The government wouldn’t care about that. It might be t…

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@whalekeeper

I feel like most of what you just said doesn’t really have much to do with the story………

What makes you think this is America?

Who said it was?

I sure didn’t.

The people of this country don’t have a choice. It’s do what the government says, or die.

Why would everyone give up as a group on heterosexuality?

It wasn’t so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Sure, go ahead and ask. This is still just in it’s first draft.

I have a couple other scenes with explanation so a may have already covered the questions you’re going to ask, but shoot anyways.

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

Yes, this is the “marriage one”

Okay, let me find that scene where Ethan talks to his dad all about it. The scene happened before the one with Ethan and Jonas.

That night, Ethan was unable to sleep. Despite being so tired he was ready to drop, his mind refused to let him rest, and thoughts ran dizzying circles in his…[Read more]

@whalekeeper    @koshka   @raxforge

Yes, we’re still in the basement, but it’s up to Koshka to respond because Marcel and Rory both left off with questions for Leo.
Rax can’t come down to the basement because it’s restricted. He’ll have to catch Marcel when he comes back upstairs.

@whalekeeper

I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?

I think the fight is mostly over, I don’t know about the agents (@ellette-giselle). But Rax has stopped harassing people and wants to find Marcel to say sorry and maybe heal him.

@whalekeeper

Just stumbled across this. That was great!! Very interesting, it kept me wanting to read until the end to figure out exactly what was going on. Everyone else has already said some things about adding clues, and I would suggest adding one or two more as well. Other than that, good job, and thanks for the cookie!

@whalekeeper

Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.

Okay, that makes sense

You either took snickerdoodle, or white chocolate macadamia nut.

White chocolate macadamia nut? Never had that. And I’ve only had snickerdoodles once before. Hmmm hard desicion…I’ll take the white…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You’re welcome 😊

and ok, that clears some stuff up! Some more clues would definitely help, I think :3

@whalekeeper the poor boi 😭😭

I think you described everything well! For someone that hasn’t been through that, I will be honest in saying that it took me a moment or two to kinda figure out what was going on, but I figured it out in time.

I agree with Loopy and RAE in that it’s confusing what happened to/where Barnes went

otherwise, it’s…[Read more]

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Tenz & Reid

“…Now we can turn to conversation.”

Tenz looked up at her. “You’re a good cook! Omi never could cook like you!” Tenz smiled at Barnes, his legs swinging under the table. His shoes scraped against the stone.

Reid glanced worriedly back at the sleeping form by the fire.

@whalekeeper

A Seb scene and a cookie in one post?? You spoil me.

*nibbles on cookie while reading*

Your writing is so good. Sorry if you were looking for criticism but I can’t think of much. I’m not really sure what happened to Barnes? I’m thinking maybe Seb was stuck for a lot longer than he thought so she left at some point?

Anyway, I’ve…[Read more]

@Andrew

can you tag people, I hate tagging.

Sure!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @the_lost-journal POEM!!!!!! ↑↑↑

@whalekeeper

Shadow awakens! Yay!! 🤗

Thanks, I’ve come back from the depths of despair (aka homework).

(shadow, you can tell us to wait for you whenever you want :P)

Thanks!

@rae

Percival

“I enjoy accounting, and also fight well. I… do you know boxing?” Barnes responded to Emeline’s question.

“And boxing? What is boxing? Is it a special pow…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz & Reid

Reid thanked Barnes, before drawing the capsule that held Tenz closer to him. He lifted the cover, gently patting Tenz’s shoulder with his hand to wake him.

Tenz opened his eyes slowly, fluttering them a bit before moaning at Reid.

“Ms. Barnes made food, are you hungry?” Reid asked.

“I’m hungry.” He quietly…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The three headed down the way Ben pointed and soon found the person of description. “Oh no!” Rax said sounding nervous “He seams badly injured!”. Cyrus looks at the kid on the ground and scoffs. “He’s probably fine, he’s still breathing.” Cyrus could an would never take a clue.

Um… soooo, I going to burst your bubble, sorry b…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Reid

“Yes, that may be wise. Especially if we plan to explore more of this place soon. Since Hugo briefly awoke already, I’m guessing he’ll wake up soon. And Tenz…he’ll get up when he smells food.” Reid reached out with one of his tendrils, drawing an apple to him. “Though I must say this place has strange and interesting food.”