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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*barnes seems to have a thing for ripping clothing. lol*
Rory
For a moment Rory felt like he was going to be sick. He knew he could never run, and even if he could possible force his body to move that would mean leaving Leo. He looked at the woman for a long time. At last, he spoke. “Why?”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, I get it.
Not like I’ve done that before -
Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Leo
He blinked. Looked at Rory. Smiled even though he knew the kid wouldn’t be able to it see through his visor.
“Thanks Rory.” He whispered with a light squeeze of his arm around the boy’s shoulder.
They stepped around the corner into sight of the white masked lady with the ruined blouse.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Rory
The sound of screeching tires flashed through his mind. Hand pushing him. Pain. Blood. Yelling.
But she had saved him.
Saved his life.
Yeah, saved me so the Agents could finish the job after interrogating me.
Rory bit his lower lip until he tasted blood. At last he let out a slow breath and looked up at Leo. “…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I didn’t meet them up, but I also wanted to give Rory a moment to process. He’s like to need it, poor kid.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Leo
He scanned the street around them and gave a grim smile at the silence. Rory’s voice sounded beside him. “Which direction? Where are your siblings?”
Leo smiled. “Left, and they’re at home.”
He led them around the corner of the church.
“Rory, the lady from the bus is on the back porch.” He felt Rory sti…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
YIPPY!
(though Rory won’t think so lol)
oh no! what happened?
go ahead and hook up with her then. she’s probably just outside. Maybe give Rory a little warning tho. lol.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay!
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Koshka replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Uncounted times in my life I have entered the children’s section of our library, see The Tale of Despereaux sitting in it’s place, displaying that adorable cover. I wanted to read it for that cover, but somehow I never have.
I think we saw the movie (or something like it enough that my brain is confused) at my aunt’s house. It w…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, dear, I still have 600 words to write.
I just realized I can’t actually flip my hair because I have a bob cut. 😐
Sad. *flips hair* XD
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie
One question I forgot in my feedback file under Worldbuilding:
Any topics you recommend I research to improve worldbuilding and make it more realistic?
Also, I somehow completely forgot to add Stripe to my list of characters I’m most eager for feedback on.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I love how you took the screenshot and turned it into your own style!
Thank you again. I would like to do this with the illustrations in the Narnia books someday.
you are definitely the best artist for the job.
Thank you again! My drawing skills are a gift from God, and while I have had to practice lot to get to…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
WOW!!! I think that’s the best thing you have ever drawn that you’ve posted on here! WOW!!!
Thank you! It really helped that I didn’t have to come up with the pose myself.
Here is the screenshot I used as a reference:

AAH it’s Zuko!! I love Zuko so much. Well done; you translated the anime-like style of the show…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie
I’ll leave Shadow and Loopy out of this since I haven’t heard from them on here for quite a while.
I am now ready to talk about my magic system. Why is it the way it is? Well to understand that, we need to start talking about book two. I am going to have to spoil it a bit, but you…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
oh my goodness, you’re hilarious!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Those are awesome! Especially the Eric one!😂
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Rowen
“That would be… good. Thanks, Percival.” Barnes nodded towards Percival and took a seat on the ground. Percival smiled back and leaned against the wall.
“Tenz. I’m… very sorry if I hurt you. And you, Reid, as well.” Barnes said after a moment.
“Don’t worry about it.” Reid answered. Tenz didn’t say anything, his blue va…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yaayyy!! Yes, I have!! And I’ve read most of her books, I think. It’s been a long time, but the memories just suddenly flooded back into my mind this evening. Flora & Ulysses has got to be her strangest book. XD
Yesss, finally someone else has read it!! Indeed, it is a very strange book but so good. I haven’t read her other books…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Here’s your Baron scene. I’m sorry that it’s so rough.
After they had eaten, Andy took him outside, showing him about the barn, instructing him on basic duties, and telling him about the animals.
As Andy was talking about the cows, a brown horse with a white blaze trotted over to the paddock fence and whinnied. Andy…
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