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Ah, yes. Let’s see, where were we?

It looks like Ben, Flare, Baron, Jenna, and Ellis are in one group in the middle of the city, with Felicity having just run off. @raxforge @rae @loopylin

Rina, Klethen, Ilahna, Jirah, Rosemary, and Rapha are on the ship with Fleet, heading out of the city. (I believe Rosemary and Rapha fell off and are…[Read more]

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I think she’s really fun, but I’ll talk about it in the long feedback post. 😊

@whalekeeper yess Tyn is awesome

IDK why, I just like her.

Oliver is my other favorite but that’s probably cause he’s an Australian lizard and you know how I feel about both of those things.

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I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting cha…[Read more]

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This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow

I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]

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I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍

Awesome!

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is the discussion guide. It’s rought right now. It was inspired by the discussion guides at the end of the second edition books for The Wingfeather Saga. However, I think that’s resulted in it being written for a younger audience than my book is aimed at (I’m…[Read more]

@theducktator thanks!

@whalekeeper haha yep

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

End credits song! (This was the most fitting version of this song I could find. As an aside, if you haven’t, look up the history of this song.)

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Happy Boxing Day! (do you celebrate this in the USA?) Let’s box this draft up with the final chapter!

Chapter the 34th – The Choice

There is one more thing I need to write for this that I will do later. A discussion guide for the reader. After that I will have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Oh wow!

That is definitely a complicated game.

I posted this on the wrong chat earlier lol

@whalekeeper Oh wow!

That is definitely a complicated game.

@whalekeeper

*Takes in a deep breath to explain the game if needed*

*Takes an even deeper breath* I explain Quidditch.

XD

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oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂

I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.

we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.

@whalekeeper I mean yeah it is pretty cool lol

@whalekeeper oh ok!

basing it off a bird makes sense too

a wild flying car, yikes haha

@whalekeeper lolllll

@whalekeeper ahahaha

let me guess, whatever’s attacking him involves snow.

@whalekeeper ohhhh

is it alive? or enchanted? or like a robot?