whaley the great and terrible

  • Hey guyssss! (I tried to post this two days ago but didn’t copy what I wrote, so I gave up after it didn’t post 😭😂 So we shall try again!)

    In the third draft of my novel, my FMC’s arc includes her making some bad decisions and going down a path she regrets. But in the midst of the aftermath of those decisions, she is actually kind of enjoy…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    That’s something I’ve never heard before XD

    I was just chatting with the YouTuber guy…he doesn’t know how it ends yet, obviously, but from what he just told me, he’s gonna love it.

    Yes, I somehow found myself with a group of people who I think represents a huge variety.

    I’m not deserving of the alpha-reader title. 😅

    I’m still crown…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Nice. How long do you think it’ll take to get their feedback and work through it? (Your guess, of course 🙂)

    I’m assuming by February. Which could either be a good guess or will have senior authors shaking their heads. The way I figure is that they probably won’t go through it fast at first due to Christmas and New Year’s, and school s…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    I’m gonna wait for Keilah to rp, since Idk what to do with Gabriel at the moment, so this is kinda a good time.

    Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.

    Yes. I have two confirmed beta readers at the moment, plus a friend who I’m going to ask, and someone who I…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper @keilah-h

    Sorry, I was literally preparing an NDA yesterday (for my beta readers) and then went off to do some other stuff.

    Gabriel Mai

    Gabriel eventually stopped by a short tree. that grew up part of the labyrinth wall. Despite the narrow trunk, which looked like strands of wood twisted together like a candy, the tree had thick…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper


    Lois

    The clock turned to five, and some of the students cheered as a tall man stepped up to the podium at the front of the room. He smiled pleasantly and held up a hand to silence them.

    “Please, everyone, take a seat. I know you all are very hungry and tired from your travels here, so I will try to make this quick. I am H…[Read more]

  • @theducktator @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

    Lois

    Lois turned away from his short interaction with Viktor, to see a teammate go down with a ball to the face. He looked to where the ball came from, and saw Felicity, standing near the front of her team. She winked at him, then threw two more balls in quick succession, one at him and one at Viktor.…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper Hehe I love that

    Speaking of funny quotes, I do have some from you…

  • Ok! I’m back! @whalekeeper @rae IDK how we’re gonna collide with each other but ehh whatever.

     

    Soldier

    I beckoned with a wing toward the door, and Sniper followed me, Huntress still unconscious on his shoulders. He set her down in one of the rooms.

    I decided to try to look through the cupboards in the opposite room. Maybe there was…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper @loopylin @ducktator
    Oof… Celerant just put Viktor in an awkward place. His deep sense of justice won’t like that. XD

    Viktor

    He was going to have a headache. Not from a strike or anything, but from this whole unruly ordeal.

    “Great job!” He passed a ball to a lanky kid with the aim of a sniper. The kid nodded and pegged another…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    XD

    Gabriel Mai

    “That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]

    • Hiii!!

      I’ve been doing great! I started learning animation–I have my own youtube channel now and have been posting How to Train Your Dragon animations. I also just started writing a fully original story (that I hopefully will be working on later today lol)

      You’re illustrating someone’s book? That is SO AWESOME.

    • Hey it feels like I haven’t heard from you in ages! Yay for illustrating a book and all your other endeavors! I did early college online too, it’s a great option.

      Oh goodness exciting things lol…
      Well I’m starting to get back into drawing and writing again after kinda taking a break from creative stuff for awhile, so that’s fun! Also I’m doing…[Read more]

      • No literally! Been ages and yeah I think a lot of people are less active now that I knew. But that all sounds so exciting! I definitely get the loss of creativity and to much pressure, sorry that happend but glad its reemerging, taking breaks are important though. But yes I’d love to go see your art! I’ll have to check that out! Tag me for sure,…[Read more]

    • Hi!! I’ve been wondering where you’ve been. I’m so glad you’re back!
      That’s really cool that you got an illustration job. What kind of book is it? Also 12 projects sounds like a lot. But also same, lol. I haven’t finished writing anything either. I have like 5 projects right now, 2 of which are taking priority.

      As for real life, I’ve been…[Read more]

      • Hi Loopy!! Thank youu!
        I’m excited for the illustration job! Its pretty lowk though, my friend is publishing and when she found out I do art she hired me to do some for her and is paying me thankfully hahaha! Her book is called Embers Of Today and is a dark fantasy, so some of the illustrations are really not my style (I drew a little evil…[Read more]

        • Cool! Sounds like a fun book. I get accidentally making a scary/ evil character cute, lol. I do that a lot in my own art. It’s a struggle.
          Oh whoops, I meant to say I was living closer to my nieces and nephew, lol. Moving out is great, actually, except for the fact that I have to pay for everything. XD
          My channel is Loopylin, just like on here. I…[Read more]

          • Gotcha hahaha! Still fun being closer to them I’m sure!

            My channel is BookSavy_ReviewsAndWrites!

            Mmmm I’d say my favorite christmas movie is probably Elf! But I love Grinch too.

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    He’d hate her attitude XD, but yes

    Gabriel Mai

    When the screaming quieted, Gabriel answered. “Pretty much, though I don’t know what a Chee-wa-wa is. Ditching them? I can’t. At the moment, the village I live in has had an increased number of attacks despite the population not growing by a large amount, and a few new varieties of…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Gabriel Mai

    Gabriel shook his head. “It isn’t proper for a Protector to share his secret with many people. Besides, if they discovered my birthmarks, the fact I’m the Protector wouldn’t save me. I’ve already been marked as a demon by my previous village, and they’ve all seen the Protector fight at some point or another.” The red…[Read more]

  • @whalekeeper Your brother is an absolute diamond lol. Sounds like you have a good relationship with him.

  • @whalekeeper

    Oh my goodness! He’s such a good sport tho to reply like that! XD

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Sorry that I haven’t been replying as soon as usual. A raffle I was hosting on Unvale ended and I’m trying to organize and get the winners their prizes.

    Gabriel Mai

    “Because it’s a secret, and we aren’t that close. To be honest, the only people I know from that village who I trust not to gossip about it is Master, Isabella and her…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Gabriel Mai

    “No. I don’t have anyone like that. Isabella is simply the one who gives me cinnamon buns while making some sort of banter comment.” Gabriel shook his head.

     

     

    I will say Isabella most definitely has a crush on him, though he’s oblivious because he has no idea what that looks like XD.

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Gabriel Mai

    Gabriel clapped, genuinely smiling under his mask. “Just like that! No, only the Fourth knows I can throw hatchets. To my acquaintances, they would say I’d be the first one to die if a monster attacked because I have no self-preservation and they think I have no training,” Gabriel chuckled, amused by their opinions. “No,…[Read more]

  • Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago

    @whalekeeper

    Gabriel Mai

    Gabriel smiled softly. “Take a step closer to the tree before you throw again, it should properly rotate and lodge in the tree that way,” He took the hatchet and lodged it perfectly in the tree. He retrieved it for Lucy before speaking again. “I’ve seen such games at festivals. I never participated, though I have been…[Read more]

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