Enid

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I don’t have much to add since @thearcaneaxiom points were really good (nice job!)

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I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase to give up his sight as well as his mobility. It’s too on-the-nose for Chase’s character, since he often gets marked with physical things like scars, stuttering, and the mobility thing. I felt less sorry for him, and more “oh okay that happened.”Idk, it felt like waaaaay…

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@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene for you

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c @kielah-h @theshadow @ellette-giselle @anyone

I have a really sweet but sad Chase scene. For context, this is after Chase’s last battle with Narsa Jeptune.

oh, and beware, I’ve barely edited this. Criticism welcome 🙂

Chase…

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@whalekeeper

Looks like it might be seven!

Anyone else?

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This is a hard situation. I’m not going to tell you what to do, because I haven’t dealt with such situations before, and I’m not going to claim any authority on the subject (though I do have family who might be able to help). That being said, the biggest red flag to me is her parents. If she is not only willing, but actively…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

you need people to believe in you, even if you can’t sometimes. I have low self-esteem sometimes and I need my mom to put me back on track. If we tell ourselves we are worth nothing, that’s going to have mental consequences later down the road.

Yes yes yes! That’s exactly what I was going for!

As someone who completely relates to Sef…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Thanks that makes me feel a little better!

And I know it’s weird that I’m only 14 and are writing about this kind of stuff…

And what’s even more strange is that I was never ever exposed to violence or horror movies or bad books as a young child. So at eight years old when I started writing about slavery and…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Ok, I’ve been playing around with the front cover to The Space Between Us. What…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]

@keilah-h @whalekeeper Should we bring this back?

And, Keilah, I’d love if you added Mundy! Mayfly would have so much fun using her powers on him.

Question, should I try to add Tenz?

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Would anyone like to see the cover of my newest book I’m about…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I don’t have any original characters but I kinda want to see the Bad Batch in this style…..lol

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I have a character, whenever space opens up.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @rae @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6

Anyone wanna read the possible book blurb for Broken Shackles? 👀

In continuation of Freedom’s Fire

The Second World War has finally come to an end, and

both Leon Wagner and Riker Schind must live with

the aftermaths of war and…

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@whalekeeper NO WAY I literally was just thinking that your church is our auntie church

Therefore, if we are sons and daughters of the church, you are my second cousin once removed

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I really do understand what you mean about external conflict though

Def the 1st book had the conflict with all of the war things, all of the antagonists, resistance, etc

The 2nd book has external conflict mostly involving tension between people, alcoholism (for Leon), fights, acted upon hatred, etc

Like how in the second book,…[Read more]

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @grcr  @savannah_grace2009 @jonas  @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @anyoneelseiforgot

btw, If anyone would be willing, I have a WIP for a 5th draft that I am trying to wrap up for publishing. I would love some f…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I’ve actually heard a lot of authors say internal is harder, and I don’t understand it 😂 External is sooooo much harder for me. It wasn’t as hard in the 1st book, but Hans was a huge contributor to that

@whalekeeper

lol, you’re good. Ik you don’t know my book as well, so you’re fine XD Def noted what you said about external…[Read more]

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I LOVE it! Thank you so much!