whaley

@linus-smallprint

Ugh, Alan actually did it. I was hoping he’d come to his senses. The ending of that chapter is the kind that always makes me and my siblings chant “read another chapter!” when my dad does read alouds. Anyway, I think the descriptions of magic were fine. It’s fantasy, and you made it all up.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)

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“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.

Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”

N…

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@whalekeeper

Ooh, fun question. I would write a suicide note and throw one of my coats in the river so it looks like I drowned myself.

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Amelia

(I hope to have Stephen and David soon)

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Older Joseph

@linus-smallprint

Saw a movie with this in recently and it was painful.

Don’t get me started.

I have some of the boards done. Not all of them tho.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I took so long to get back to this. I vote A!

@linus-smallprint

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

CP == Christian Perspective?

haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Cle…[Read more]

@liberty

No, it’s totally fine. I was just being dramatic.

I’m glad you enjoy the sections.

@ellette-giselle

Ahhhh, gotcha.

Sure!

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Anybody want to see some Character Aesthetics?!?!?

@linus-smallprint

SEVENTH TIME IT DELETED MY POST. GRRRR

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind.

Okay, I got through about twenty seconds of the first song.

FF!!!! I love Final Fantasy soundtrack! XV is my…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

So, whenever I’m overwhelmed, whether by emotions or circumstances, or just whatever, I have to remind myself that God is there and He cares and wants me to turn to Him for help. I understand it’s not easy for everyone to talk to a God that they can’t physically see or hear, but He’s there, Kefa. He wants you to come to Him wit…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

beast.

Fine. I’ll write. I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*

@liberty    (because I’m nice and you like my story. lol)

Josef looked down. “It’s complicated. I didn’t choose this. I’m just… trying to survive like everyone else.

Franz shook his head bitterly. “Survive? By enforcing fear?”

Josef dropped his voic…

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@linus-smallprint

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Hmm. I wounder how true this will turn out to be.

Haha,

Poor Joseph. I completely understand his reaction to this.

I know poor…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aww!! 🥰

So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?

Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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@rae

Ah! That makes sense!!

lol.

Hey.

Just wanted to pop in to let you know I’m still praying for you Kefa.

May God be with you.

now I need to writer something for Nahim…