@whalekeeper
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 days, 11 hours ago
@whaley
Those are hilarious–
Are we sure that superhero has good intintions?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 11 hours ago
Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂
Ah, I get it.
We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @liberty
Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 12 hours ago
Probably for doing dirty work. *shrug* basically completing tasks that the main villain doesn’t want to (or can’t)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.
I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.
Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 13 hours ago
Oh my goodness! That’s adorable!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 13 hours ago
Don’t have them there just for the sake of stupidity. Don’t make it look like all you want its stupidness and so you’re throwing in characters with the roll of being stupid.
They have to have a point and a reason.
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Potato reporter and
whaley are now friends 2 days, 20 hours ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 20 hours ago
Excuse me while I go DIE OF CUTENESS. I was literally hopping around squealing, and then ranted about it for five minutes to one of my sisters. Your couples are ADORABLE. I LOVE THEM.
“You’re really pretty by the way. Most girls can’t pull off red, but it looks pretty rad on you.”
“For real,” her friend agreed.
“Is it natural?”
Hal…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 21 hours ago
Hallelujah! Baron is saved! 🥹😃🥳 It’s so beautiful!
Does this story feel preachy?
Did Baron’s redemption feel legit?
It felt legit and not at all preachy!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 21 hours ago
Yeah, that’s kind of when I relapsed into it too (about two years ago or so.) Yeah, definitely, knowing what it is gives it less power. I’m a lot better than I was a few years ago when it was worst, but I still have bad days every now and then. Nice to know that other people understand what it’s like too though. I kind of shy away…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 21 hours ago
I have no idea who those people are, but I like this idea. Just please don’t make them stupid.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
Don’t worry–I’m a professional. Interviewing disturbing criminals is how I make a living.
(@whalekeeper lemme just share a document with you that NOBODY ELSE, you hear me NOBODY ELSE is allowed to access. Here you go: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_D2daneyR8ztLjBodCE4cVYL5X25DHBosvwc6hl3n_U/edit?usp=sharing )
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
*ring ring*
“… H-hello… Ah.. you’re here to talk about the serial killer…? Umm… today is not the best day… We just had a little… mishap… I guess I could transfer your over to the man who runs the interviews… Okay… Sorry our manager was just murdered…” – Pablo
“Hi… Ah, yes Pablo just told me… Yes, I think that…[Read more]
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Ruth's profile was updated 2 days, 22 hours ago
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@raxforge like my new name?
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
*calls the news station*
Oh, hi, I’m Stephie! I’m so passionate about protecting potatoes. You know, I’m an expert in therapeutics and in neuropsychology. My specific area of interest is in psychopaths. I’m currently writing a book about how they work, and I’ve been interviewing the most dangerous criminals in order to compile…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 23 hours ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh man!! That really got to me!!!
I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.
YES! It felt very legit!
One of my favorite!!
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