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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
Julian is certainly a blame others type, considering his reaction to Adrian’s death. Leon, I’m not so sure about it.
Yes, very much so.
I’m not really sure either. He’s somewhere in the middle honestly.
No. We still have it, though we haven’t played it for a while. We just ignore the story when we do play it.
Ah, one of those…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days ago
he’ll go doggedly on.
I was stunned for almost a week and didn’t think clearly.
(again, different person. But trauma does weird things)
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days ago
I don’t think it would be out of character. Like Ellette said, he’d probably be too distraught and traumatized to think straight. But if he did stop for the night, he’d probably realize it wasn’t safe, and go someplace else.
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 days ago
Oh my goodness, the tea one! 🤣🤣🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
Oh my word.
Why are all your characters so messed up?!?!
(quickly hides Rory because he’s totally not messed up)
😂😝
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
You’re welcome! I’d love to see Everette in a bind like that, and maybe someone surprising like Cole (could be a really cool moment) is like, “hold on a sec, he got less time then the rest of us,” or something like that.
Just a thought. It could show an interesting angle on the dislike of any sort of Christian beliefs or standings.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days ago
Nope.
I wouldn’t think so.
I think he’ll run until he drops (basiclly) and then he’ll either be so dead tired that he sleeps hard, or he’ll fight nightmares and flashbacks. I don’t think he’ll have time to think about this sort of things.
Out of experience, when you go through trauma parts of your mind just kind of turn off…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
Haha. That’s funny. we’re complete opposite! I struggle with never ever ever being wrong. Ever. Things just “happen to me” and often times “the world just hates me and is out to get me.” 😂
I have never struggled with blaming myself for something, but rather blaming others when it’s my fault or when blame isn’t even supposed…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
“Well, let’s see that brad army!” – Palmer
“Vey scary! Wholesome news hour, we have just gotten news that a little girl saved a puppy from drowning! She saw a puppy floating away on a raft, she questioned it and began to wade in. When the puppy saw her, he began to jump up and down with joy! But than the puppy fell in… She swam to the rescue an…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
“Ignore her. The missing people were last seen heading to school. They all had a few things in common: one, they all took the bus, the same bus that went missing. Two, they all are the best at something at their school… Like how Perry is on the speech and debate team, and he is the best in the whole state at it. Or how Peace is the most pop…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
“Uh… the stories?” – Parsley
“Well there’re trash.” – Piper
“Than you should be happy you found something on your level! :D” – Parsley
“WHAT?! GET OVER HERE!!” – Piper
“AH!” – Parsley
“Anyway, Lets start with @theducktator! Or, the most esteemed feathered one! She has joined us for our olympics, and in her honor we are dedicating a whole…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
“Uh… the stories?” – Parsley
“Well there’re trash.” – Piper
“Than you should be happy you found something on your level! :D” – Parsley
“WHAT?! GET OVER HERE!!” – Piper
“AH!” – Parsley
“Anyway, Lets start with @theducktator! Or, the most esteemed feathered one! She has joined us for our olympics, and in her honor we are dedicating a whole…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
“WELCOME!” – Palmer
“Um… like why do I get paired with the weirdos…? Anyway, I guess welcome to potato news… Or just leave, that would be nice.” – Piper
“I AM JUST SO EXCITED TO BE ON POTATO CITY NEWS FOR THE FIRST TIME!” – Palmer
“Who?” – Piper
“ME!” – Palmer
“Asked?” – Piper
“Oh…” – Palmer
“Well our stories today are pretty boring… Gerb…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 days, 1 hour ago
Considering the circumstances, I don’t think the above will go through his mind. I think he’ll run there because that’s the only place he can go really, and he’s going to be having a really, really hard time. It’s going to be surprising if he thinks clearly enough to get back there without getting lost or injured. Then he gets…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
Is it bad that it was reversed?
I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment
Ugh.
I had that feeling as I was editing it.
Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..
So is it bad that Julian responded differently?
Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 3 hours ago
Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.
Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 5 hours ago
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